hays sorry man but this novel is not my cup of tea, the mc is not overpowered at all, hes struggling just to get stronger, u should change the overpowered tag to weak to strong tag bht anyway thabjs for the story author..
"sorry for my bad english"
This is my review after more than a year of writing this book. I will start by saying that this is not my best work, but one that is very fun to write, and from the comments I receive, it is quite fun to read as well.
This is not an action-packed story with very high tension and suspense, so don’t expect that. It is more than anything a Slice of life. This is a story about a man who turned into energy and can no longer die. As a result, he goes around the world, the galaxies, and eventually the multiverse to see new things and visit new places.
You will see all types of power systems, all types of stories, not just Eastern Fantasy as I idiotically put it up as. There’s cultivation, magic, summoning, space adventure, and will be many more things.
In addition, I wish to answer a few questions and clear some confusion/ hatred.
Q. Why did you turn him into a Human? That beats the premise of the story being about a Non-human MC.
A. I didn’t turn him into a human, he was always meant to be one. I never intended to write a non-human MC to begin with when the idea first popped into my head. Still, in a sense, he’s still not a human and never will be.
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Q. Why is the MC dumb/ not intelligent?
A. When I started, I didn’t even know how to write a mediocre MC, let alone one with a brain. So I decided to go with an easy choice that will let me do some exposition without making it an info dump. So, basically, it was because I wasn’t very good at writing in general.
*****
Q. Why are the first 100 or so chapters bad?
A. When I started writing the book, I had 0 hope of continuing it. I was already writing another book I had started just a month ago, so I didn’t pay much attention to it. I gave this book maybe an hour at most to simply write a chapter and no other time to think of the plot. As a result, the first 100 chapters are some of the worst chapters I have ever written.
I only started caring because it ended up being quite a bit popular amongst the readers.
*****
Q. Why does the MC not jump in a volcano and sleep for a million years?
A. I get this question a lot, even though it is explained. He cannot just sleep forever. There is a high chance of losing energy instead of gaining it when he sleeps. Besides, he likes meeting new people and seeing the world.
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Q. Why does the MC care about humans?
A. Why not? He was a human too, and in some way, he still is one. If you are looking for a cold MC, or anti-hero MC, this is not it. Just because he’s an immortal, he isn’t immediately apathetic to everything around him.
*****
I hope you can read past the first 100 chapters, and maybe even enjoy them. If you cannot, that’s understandable as well.
Thank you for reading the book either way.
This is hidden gem
space manipulation and cultivation sutra are best i have seen
For me its the best novel there i have read every eastern fantasy but this one with every chApter hits a spot for me its simply brilaint .first story arc completes in 1100 chapter but this is worth it .there is character development . No young master no harem no irritations simply .mc does what he wants to do in latest chapter is exploring the things by detail which is looking amazing and cultivation system of both qi and body tempering is also well explained .for body tempering its going a best way there is out in this universe of writing
Get through the first arc. It is the worst part of the novel 100%. It is a singing competition, but everything is just weird ans doesnt feel right. It probably only stayed like this bc author went premium and couldnt edit chapters. After the show though, comes the actual story. MC finally starts to do things, so it does better. There are cliche and forced moments, but they dont leave you annoyed. One of the better stories on webnovel.
The work is simply sublime!
Lyra is the best character, too bad she left us early, but she never let us down!
The author is to be congratulated, job very well done.
I know the story is good when I feel part of my soul leaving with its ending, the ending is also perfect!
My thanks to the author.
I will miss Lyra, Ameria, Milliandra and Aleni.
My only sadness is not seeing Aleni's children.
The author and logic are like water and oil
1. Where did MC get shorts?
2. Where did MC get googles?
3. why can the girl get a point of vitality from casual relaxed swimming?
4. How on earth can a social person and an expert in prno don't recognize a bra?
And this is only beginning.
very cute book
Pleases update author. I'm really enjoying it recently and love this kind of novel already. I hope you keep updating it and doesn't abandoned the story, I love to see this update again,
Pfft, hehe, I get hooked up because the game is called "God's Domain" hehe, God's Domain is it ey? Well then, show me all you got and don't disappoint me.
A really interesting plot it's a shame for the Writing quality, there are tons of typos and errors, also the punctuation is a mess. The story has lot of potential and a unique plot but you really need to improve the writing quality. Like this it's not entertraining. I would love to read it with an improved English. Work hard Mr. author, you have all the right credentials to write something incredible.
Very cool read no moral fag mc he is a proper undead abomination so no retarded bull**** like love or harem or even softness for humans due to being an ex-human.
This has army and kingdom building of undead naturally so evil mc is a given it's always nice to read about such thing to contrast all the pussy **** with moral faggots.
Good so far, not know in the future....
Dont make mc too soft and *****!!
We need ruthless mc when dealing with people that take everything from him