took me two days to read , it was captivating, those ups and down , i need more updates <3
This book is so playful
Amazing read..loving it ❤️❤️
This awesome book keeps up waiting for each chapter, I highly recommend it.
this is an interesting story.. i love it! by the way, is there any social media to keep up with your readers?
this novel is so omg, I love it so much
This narrative is a true masterpiece; I eagerly anticipate each new installment, arriving weekly. The interactions between the main character (MC) and the love interest (ML) are endearing and heartwarming.
I absolutely adore novels like this. The main character (MC) is vulnerable yet powerful in his own way. The misunderstandings from those around him have led to an abundance of care and affection. It's touching to see how the MC, who was previously unaware of such love, is now cherished and pampered by all the heroes. Thanks to the system that orchestrates these seemingly absurd events; it's because of you that I feel such warmth. I love you, system.
That is one long *ss acronym
Finally someone who understands true masterpiece. This novel should be ranked way higher than it is. I mean this novel is one of the best novels I've read. There are no complaints that I found myself with it except for some personal ones but that's totally okay. The mc is like the king of all mc. He is cold but not too cold, he cares about his people but not to the point that it will stop him from doing what he wants to do. Thank you for recognizing this novel for what it truly is. Because if you didn't then you wouldn't have tried out the mtl.
You only think that Fuyuki did a better job because you're used to his art.
If we had this artist from the get-go, you'd think there was nothing wrong with it.
I read the first two chapters, and I can tell exactly that the author didn't know how to write a novel. He failed to set the tone of the story, failed to introduce the main character, failed to establish the plot, failed to lay the foundation for world-building. The first chapter, which should have been the most captivating, was wasted on setting up a conspiracy involving characters I don't know and don't care about, as the author never gave me a chance to know or bond with them.
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At first, I thought it was just a short prologue. I expected the author to circle back and set up the plot after it ended. However, that wasn't the case, he simply ignored all of it. After reached chapter 19 without a single hint of plot, I decided to drop it.
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Sometimes it's just so obvious that the author doesn't know how to write. He may or may not have a good story in his head, but without writing skill, it's all useless.