Great work love the creation ,the characters are amazing, I love everything about this book keep going Author I'm so in love with work great job .highly recommended ☺
I like the idea of the story I also like the main character but holy feck does it get difficult to read my man needs an editor. It’s gotten to the point where I’m not sure if I should be choosing to drop such a good idea or struggle having to read the broken English and **** grammar. Mr author please get an editor skilled in your native language and in English so you can turn this amazing idea into a readable book
Very interesting worldbuilding and a unique magic system taking the usual "cores" form cultivation novels and using as the basis for the magic system. The MC actually interacts with other characters like they are real people and they react as you learn to expect from said character. Overall it is a great novel and I cant wait for more chapters.
It's a great story and the author improved their writing very fast, allowing for a very nice reading experience.The story almost reminded me of the great theatrical pieces from Classical Greece with the conflict between the gods, the complex drama and relationships, and the extensive worldbuilding.Great work!!!!
Why is this embarassing story brought up again, the translation is subpar, the mc thought is really confusing, the author is certainly never do even a little it about jellyfish to make a good story, if it's a otherworld jellyfish the mc should know the ordinary jellyfish and how different it is, but the author make it like the jellyfish is the same with one in earth. Make me wonder if there is no one in china with knowledge to comment about this absurtness or the jellyfish in china is different than on other part of the world.
It smells like daises, very nice. It was a warm winter evening when the spring air current came washing over like a warm cloak of fragrance. Truly a luminous sight. Such wonders occur only once ever 900 years. Blessed as I was, I bless the earth with my kisses of endearment. May we meet again in the same life my love. The Dao smiles down upon you grasping your left foot. Breathe and Inhale excrement of the fairies for you are truly blessed.
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I love the synopsis and the title. So as the characters features and attitudes.They really act the way the author want it and they deliver it very good.
The novel is interesting and I really like the plot, character development and desipte the few grammatical errors, the novel is fantastic. The plot is interesting and I like the twist on the assassin trope. I hope for this novel to be picked.
I don't know if this novel is contracted with the original work from the comic version or just some guys found the original novel version and translated it, but you guys can check the novel version, it's great.
Seriously how is this ranked so high? I mean I know my comment will be erased like all my previous comments on other novels but still.How is the MC even betrayed? The dude literally walked up and stabbed the guy in the chest like some cheater who paid off his opponent if anything I was happy that he was tricked as the guy is literally retarded and then he died? What?? What is this Sword Art online 2.0? The plot literally jumps from him dying to all of the sudden waking up in the past and he accepts it within seconds/minutes of waking up no problem. It then jumps to him solving all his family problems and ends up in game where it is suppose to be the first day of the game going live. Instead I don't know what the author was smoking but it feels like the game has been live for years as all of a sudden "elites" and guilds are popping out of nowhere with no real explanation on their backgrounds other than the characters being flat with no real character other than antagonizing the MC.Don't even get me started on the ridiculous 57000 exp required to level up to like 80% of level 2. I literally felt my balls hurt and want to smash my sexy laptop after reading this crap. 12 chapters in and I feel like this story is one of the worst pieces of crap I have ever seen. There are tons of stories better than this pile of crap ranked a lot lower and somehow this is near the top? Please if you are going to treat your readers as retards as least make it slightly believable Qidian.