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Each chapter keeps me on my seat wondering what is happening next. I feel like I'm really getting to know the characters as the story keeps going. Can't wait to see what happens next!
This book is somehow related to true world. There are communities who doesn't get freedom and opportunities. Hassan shows the sad truth of this world. For me it is a great read and definitely everyone should read it.
I like how the story progress and how the Author portray the character of the MC in the story! Its a slow pase type of a story and, Author there's more room for development. There are some grammatical errors but its understandable beacause its still new, I hope that you can published more chapters. Overall, I will start to follow up this story from now on
this little history have some future but tooooo little chaps and toooo irregular chap updates but the plot have some intresting things that can be exploted and is too early to tell how good o not it is.
Quite the thriller loved this story looking forward to wht will happened to the killer will the police catch him and get him treated in time or will he juat actually die there
People who said that this novel is a gem must have some kind of tumors their brains ?
I really really hope that this book puts out more chapters really soon!! I really miss this book and I cant wait to see what happens next!! I just hope the MC doesnt take the stupid ugly lightning horse beast or whatever it is!!! I hope the MC finds like a cub planet and ends up getting a couple different cubs to help him out and at the same time he can bring all the girls hes married too or going to be married to so they all can get at least 1 maybe 2 and this way they have another form of protection with them and the MC should get the machinery race to make something like mechanical pets or something that can help them when needed and or send video calls and all that to anyone that has one of the same things or even anything to communicate with but it would be cool for all of them to have the something so when ever someone goes out and they r by themselves or in a small group then they can still talk to each other and they should be upgradeable by learning and upgrading parts after awhile or the more the thing grows in power the bigger and better weapons and power source and memory it can upgrade for! Hope to see at least more chapters soon!!
good book so far on chapter 117 but to much padding to explain a simple items takes like 3 chapters. also the mc likes to forget some important stuff.
If you came here after TOS expecting the same thing u will be sadly disappointed. Why u might ask? Let me explain after reading the first 15 chapters. The Mc has no defining goal he's simply going with the flow. He's born in a position of disadvantage yet seems to not fully develop his powers nor try to escape his disposition. The author also mentions these power he has but seems not to actively utilize them. The Mc feels so small in this story simply because the world is so developed and they are so far behind in power and technology. More to add but im lazy and also waiting to see wt happens next.
Where did the author go?! COME BACK PRECIOUS AUTHOR!
Funny Novel
Had a lot of potential
Good Novel
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