I have to admit that I have attempted to read this story not once but twice. Man, this story was just good only for 20 or 30 random chapters. I feel that plot line have so many loopholes. The disciples that choose are good and system is not that much use for him. I think that was a just a quest system. I don't want to talk so much about this story. MY OVERALL IMPRESSION IS BAD.
This is truly a masterpiece. The worldbuilding is absolutely great. The main character is unlike the other cliche characters, who are always indecisive and need some kind of tragic event to start cultivating. He does what he wishes to while still maintaining his moral valuesThe story has a very steady development. Neither too slow nor too fast. While the writing quality needs a bit of work, I truly think this is a story worth one's time to read.
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Such a great and interesting novel, it played the rag to riches part very well. Alot more interesting than other novels that use the same theme. Sucks that this is another great novel that webnovel didn’t pick up ?
1 star for premium at 100 chapters, not worth it!???????????????????????????????????????????????????
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Not bad, I'm still seeing where this will go, and also update faster.....................
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Its alright, but not great.The translation is good, and there are no problems in the grammar.However, one of the characters in the book is Kobe Bryant, who is portrayed very differently to how i imagined him to be, and more like what a chinese author would think him to be.Slightly unrealistic in some of the world building aspects, and about 8 chapters and 2 months in, i srill dont know the names of the MCs family, or anything about the MCs family.6.2 out of 10
It's the first time I'm reading a sports based novel. And I already like it. From what I have read, apart from silly typos the story is really good one and worth reading. The starting ,the game background everything is really neatly and beautifully written. Can't wait to read more. Keep up the Great work Author ?
The novel is awesome in every aspect. The good translation quality makes it agreeable to read this awesome novel in story development, character design and world background.The only not (totally) perfect aspect is, that the next chapter is not released on a fixed time (normaly noon in UTC+1)
I like this novel a lot! It has similarities with other taming cultivation novels but the uniqueness of the system creates an interesting premise for the story to progress. MC is good, the idea of the little sister being enemies with the MC is super novel and I like the concept of the dimensional rifts for cultivation zones. Really want this to be picked up as part of the next voting pool.