the character sucks, is whiny, and to be honest it feels like a women from a self help group wrote this novel... (nothing against women author, i feel that the mc should be a woman from the latent male-male tension) i feel like my balls are shriveling up and my junk falling off reading about this p as in ussy. i think the writer should just write regular novels, this genre of writing is about escapism into fantasy not drag back into mental health clinic. sorry could not continue reading this trash.. i'll have to past on this.. also I suspect this is being busted artificially to get high ratings. please stop, this is very di
It’s a great story just wish there were more chapters to read
I don't know why such sad backstories make me sick of this, so much so that I'm ready to quit the novel, and I don't care that in the future you will somehow "change" his character, I don't care. After all, this does not happen in life, and I have enough of it, mc garbage.
About 5 of the chapters are repeats and makes reading this a total mess if they don't fix this then this shouldn't be continued in any form what so ever
Serously a brainless story. The author doesn't know anything they're writing about.Main character is apparently from the "slums" when he lives on an island city in the United States. Really? Literally the most expensive places to live around the world are on coasts and islands.The author also constantly pushes elitist ideals when describing the entire human race. They're constantly saying things like, "Someone from the slums has no intelligence" and treat him like an animal because of his social status when that literally makes no sense. A story is bound to fail when literally every chapter is an insult to the reader, their culture, their country, or their way of life.
Splendid story. I hope to see the continuation of this hidden gem. Was instantly hooked from the first chapter. It’d be a shame to stop. Don’t let your fans down.
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Very good love the world building and storytelling
Please update more chapters of this book
It is a good story, definitely worth reading it. Thanks for the story, please keep posting new chapters. For all those who haven’t yet tried it you will definitely like the story
did you drop this book? or is it completed I just noticed there is o ending xududufufufufud7d7d7f7f7f7f7f7f7f7d7d7f7f7f7f7f7fufufufuc
This book is the reason I made a Webnovel account as well as downloaded the app just so I could show my support to the author of a true gem of a book