I liked this novel, I hope the author continues to write and does not abandon it. Really looking forward to when 18+ chapters are added.!!
Honestly, when I read the first chapter I thought this novel is focus on dual-cultivation hahaha but turn out it's not like that. At first we might confuse about the "immoral system" and how this system works. So far the author has done a great job to developing this novel, from the story line and the characters. Even though sometimes I feel like to punch the MC hahaha (please forgive me XD) but I believe that the author will make a progress about her personality in the future. And now I'm following this story in my daily basis and I'm quite satisfied with the author's job. Well done ???
The world is not fully build but keep the updates coming. We still dont know the name of this MYSTERIOUS main character..lol. Still a good read so far!!
The author expressed concern about novels that don't explain their magical systems very well, and I am fully in agreement. However, this guy isn't just talk. He actually followed through with his criticisms and explain how magic actually worked properly! Therefore, I think that this deserves a read, if only for the properly explained magic system!
Chapters are 500 words or less.. The English isn't all that great, the formating and editing is also lackluster. Maybe Author should focus on spending more time on each chapters and making them longer and better.
the English and writing... is barely readable, you could but you need to have patience in rearranging them to make it manageable. Mistakes like comma, capital letters and redundancy are issues I just... sigh.other than the occasional commentary, there isn't much of a change and that's just a waste of time, as I could just watch the anime.the Character... there are a lot of plotholes like his psychology and pacing in character development, he didn't change and even if he did he just copy pace the mc. And not a good one at that.the System... god why... normally I have no problem but the pacing and redundancy is just an eyesore.
Ok here's my actual review In terms of the grammar and English it's quite good I didn't really see any spelling mistakes or confusing sentences so yeahThe characters have depth to them with each of them having a interesting personality, background, and interaction to each other.The updates are honestly quite good sometimes you get 2 chapters in a day and I'm here for itThis is honestly quite a good novel even if did not involved a yandere the mystery and how characters interact with one another is honestly quite good to me So yeah I recommend you read it
Nice shot, want to see more of Jenny and Austin's scenes.
Hello author, please why are updating one chapter today?
wow is all i have to say with this one
please allow us readers to finish this book!! getting sick of 1 chapter every other day!!
why can't I have many chapters instead of the small doses