Sadly my opinion is biased, but that is my right as the author.
One of the best novel I've read in a while since a novel with a genre like this mostly end up as dropped cuz author has lost interest ( I really hope you won't br one of them) Btw I'm really looking forward to the interaction between mc and amyra and can you give a estimation of how strong she is to mc (since current she is pretty much the strongest right know in the same generation and and her backstory feels like mystry af )
May the lord grant Lord Page Picker heavenly scribe status cause only he understands the kind of cooking that is being done here, I smell absolute peak incoming.
I love everything so far about the story I like how the author choose words well and how each of his characters are when reading is like I’m interacting with the story itself.
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the line between a want and a need thins when people are desperate??......this story so far has progressed in a way i had always wanted to fantasize about ??.......I love the author depicting the twisted emotions? and the flow of the story like a roller-coaster ✨️?....looking forward to the story development ??....# sofreakingthrilling#❤️u200d?❤️u200d?
Transported to a magical realm, ordinary boy Drake becomes an extraordinary mage. With dragon queens, epic battles, and ancient secrets, this fantasy adventure will keep you enthralled.
Writing quality 5 : well written Story Development 3 Character design 1: Mc is hyper dumb wimp... bro doesn't know who he is , what he wants , what he does ? World background 3: I am at 100 but I don't know enough about the world ? Good story but I feel like the author is not interested in doing this
Fantastic world built and a strong plot. I love the characters and their interactions. The flow of the chapters is pretty engaging that I didn't feel bored at all. Though punctuation corrections at some places should be taken care of. Definitely a worthy one to add to your library.
The first thing I see a cover that needs some working, I am sure you could use an AI program to make your work stand out and more attractive, the synopsis could use some work to draw your users in. *Please note I only want to help you get better as I only seek to better my fellow writers* The beginning pages are very short, WN goes by 1.5k to 1.6k depending so I assume you are a new author, but it is interesting I hope you continue to do what you love.
This book is awesome and the grammar etc is impeccable. I while heartedly recommended to anyone who enjoys a good system type novel. Serious props to the author. Take my stones. :)
To much things ask to do before reading ???