Definitely a good fan fiction !A must read!!The mc is cool and unique I really enjoyed reading and the storytelling was both powerful and beautifully written
it has a promising start I'm actually interested in where this is going
this story is captivating, although the grammar is a lil bit iffy. .. .. .. I still understand it, The updating stability is slow and can make me lose interest. .. . pls update it soon
Very good novel I the author recommend it
This stuff is good. Nice world building and lore. Makes you want to read more. Also it's really easy to read compared to many other novels. Everyone give it a try.
This novel is very good. I was impressed when i realized that depth of the story. The characters are well-designed and the Mc is very interesting too. I will certainly read until the end and add it to my library.
The story is good, it starts off a bit slow but around chapter 10 it starts to kick it up. The reason I say writing is low, is the author needs to use spell check or proof read the work. I’m 48 chapters in and there is so many spelling/grammar issues that takes me a second to decipher their intentions. They also have several areas where they forget what was mention in last chapter or even at beginning of current chapter making contradictory statements, for example they mention the MC was unconscious for nearly 24 hours and half a chapter later that 24 hours has been changed to an hour. All in all it’s a good read, just need to take some time and decipher the author’s intentions for the story. Hopefully this will be seen by author and they can adjust some in the future as it is a great story so far and I want to see it improve and continue.
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5. Human genius (Immortal)
"Okay, let's have fun kid." the Man try to grab my hand but i slap his hand.
Humans can surpass his
Never! Never!