very good, best novel I've ever seen, please continue author. EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP.
this is my first time ever seeing a novel with the MC as a panda. I know pandas are one of the strongest type of bears and biggest and laziest.
enjoyed reading this series hope the authors keeps updating cuz I very much enjoyed it ............................. ????????????????????????????????
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Ok, Ima be straight with you bro. This was painful to read. The dialogue is rough, although clear. I mean to say that while the grammar is good, some of what they're saying makes no sense if you think about it from the way an actual conversation works and flows. Granted, I didn't read that far, but if you think about the dialogue in the conversations you're writing and it doesn't make sense to you, it probably will not make sense to readers. I don't say this at all as hate or anything, I say this in encouragement. Believe me, your work so far is not at all as bad as others I've seen, by far. Good job so far and good luck.
the novel has a lot of potential but the way you are making the mc need to ask the system for everything is making it a lot less interesting to read
Keep it up man love the storyline and How You made the character but can you keep his aunt alive please and have her motivate him in his game's
The grammar and typos make this a slightly annoying read. The nicknames are cringe. The FL isn’t really my cup of tea in terms of her behavior. Admittedly, I did drop this book early because I was just unable to get into it, so I don’t know if the story gets better.
I really love this novel and it's characters especially the MC, The MC is so intriguing that at times I cannot predict his thoughts or actions and can't help but wonder , why did he do this?
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The book is mediocre in my opinion. There aren’t much scene that gets your blood going. Xpxpxpxpxp pxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxp ppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxp pxpxppxx