Hmm,this story is the best among the rest. The literature work is wonderful. It's very entertaining. The writer is too much. Kudos to you. Please produce more chapters, I don't mind the votes.
Yes, it's erotic. No it's not Fap'n'go. This is a real Adult Novel. Not a porno in words. The author does a great job of having a real story and world history being built with very few info dumps all the while having a nice erotic tinge to the story for great laughs and silly situations. If you like to actually Read a story, and want or don't mind that S ex ,one of the basis's of being humans, actually exists with reasonable details, while not being smutty, then this is a great story for you.
Sorry but dropping it early. The novel has a lot of fillers and it feels like the author is underestimating soccer players too much or the mc is just trash. First, the task given is 2km running, drink 2 litters, Spend 2 hours in the gym. The mc [author] created a loophole and not realizing it, just run 2km in the gym and gets double reward but nope. Also, a soccer player can run around 6 to 8.5 miles per game or 9.7km to 13km. I understand that the mc is a goalkeeper but 2km is ridiculously low for the mc to whine about how hard it is. Btw, I understand that the latter chapters may be better but not all reader willing to go through almost 20+ chapters of mediocre writing to get there. Anyway good luck.
The first chapter really grabbed my attention, it has something a first chapter should have, which is the main motive of drawing people into the book. I'm curious to see how things turn out between Silas and Fay. Good work Josie.
This is an amazing book! I really like that the FL is strong and not weak. keep up the great work dear author
One of the best books I've read so for on apps like this... What a good writer! Love the storyline ...️...
6 chapters in and already hooked. seriously brilliant writer.
It's a great story. But sometimes a bit rushed.
It was ok. Good build up, but the end felt rushed .
nice story ...
Awesome book some grammar errors no big deal still loved it want more
I enjoy this book a lot. waiting for mote chapters. Happy New year dear author!!!!