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This novel is honestly the biggest dumpster fire I’ve seen. The author spends no effort into proofreading or editing, has completely broken story lore by randomly changing his mind on key plot points or just simply forgetting and not bothering to try adding it in where it’s relevant. The system element is also really forced and unnatural because Author can’t decide on a stable IQ for MC. The only consistent thing about this novel is the amount of updates if you want to flush coins you’ve been warned.A few examples:- Every single chapter since ch 1 is an absolute mess of grammatical, punctual, and formatting errors that make it absolutely abysmal to read (I have read until ch 220) no hate if English isn’t your first language but with 500+ chapters out and multiple comments every chapter pointing it out you should start editing it- In ch 1 paragraph 2 MC states he has been reincarnated/transmigrated into his new body 14 years ago (story starts before his 15th birthday). Author then decides that instead at some point he transmigrated from where the story started and his memories from childhood are now jumbled and hazy since they “weren’t his” - MC starts to create different golems even upgrading some to elemental golems, Author decides to full pivot and MC’s GOLEM CREATING PATH has switched to making CYBORGS. Literal cyborgs, his spearman robot can apparently turn SPEAR QI into a PLASMA LAZER- MC acquires a DIVINE weapon (highest rank we’ve heard of) that is broken and requires the blood of SLAIN enemies to repair it, Author then has MC use a completely different blade for 90% of the time and even when he does use it no notification comes up from the system that announces anything happened
I randomly came across this book to get a change of my normal reading pace. So far it is a very good read and I look forward to continuing to follow along on the journey!
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it's a good story,unlike other novel with mc being trash F rank or something like that, mc here has abnormal rank at the beginning tho.mc is a chill guy sometimes ?Grammers are readable.
Devil 000 if your just gonna post someone else's work on web novel app at least post the entire series up to date this has more than 200 chapters yet your putting only 7 though this is a pretty nice series for all the other degenerates out their
It's the best story for Fujoshis and Otakus. I think that explains a lot I hope. Since I came here at the chapter of 2, I have no idea about updates, still wishes others to give support
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This is basically a collection of random things throughout human history. It might give you a laugh or two.Tell me how I can improve.I'm always open to constructive criticism.
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Nice book. Good synopsis. Not your normal gaming world. A a must read for all gamers. You'd love this one. Also author please update more....... Nice writing style, good world background. Keep it up.
This is a good story. It was well written and I connected with John because the way you explained what he was doing and going through. This is definitely a good read if your into this genre! Keep up the good work!