Yeah I went back a few chapters cause I was surprised from the sudden premium, and checked it out.The problem is not going premium, as I said that is good for you, and i totally agree cause your novel is worth it. The problem is than yesterday chapters till 94 were not blocked, and half a hour after chapters from 81 were blocked. WN always do that and idon't know why. ?????
The dialogue in this section is sharp as hell. Like, every line feels like it was carved out of something real. Take this exchange: "Have you had a check-up recently?" He Duoye paused. "You think I have an STD?" His words were blunt. "You've slept with so many women—isn't it normal for me to be suspicious?" I read that three times. Three times. Because it's the most devastating thing Lin Mian could possibly say in that moment. She's not being cruel for the sake of being cruel — she's trying to break the spell, to remind herself and him that this isn't some romantic reunion, it's a woman confronting the man who replaced her with two other women. And the fact that her voice is trembling? That's what kills me. She's angry and scared and still attracted to him, all at once. And He Duoye's dialogue is perfect too. "Did you miss me?" said while carrying her like a child — that's such a specific kind of arrogance. He knows exactly what he's doing. He's provoking her, testing her, seeing if she still reacts to him. And when he says "Thinking about how I'd sleep with you tonight" — casual, almost bored, but his eyes are constricting and his breath is warm against her ear. The narration does the heavy lifting here, showing us what his words can't quite hide. The author's voice as a narrator is also doing a lot of work. Lin Mian's internal monologue — "What did this dog of a man mean?" — is so perfectly her. She's calling him a dog, which is both affectionate and insulting, the way someone who still loves a terrible person talks about them.
benar tak lama ada yang mengetuk pintu rumahnya.
"Just channel all the excess mana you have into your blade. I'll handle the rest."
-Ice
After seeing how little I own, I decided to give Johnny some of the materials that I have considering some of them I won't need following the ascent to rank three.
After finishing this sentence I turn to leave.
Isaac noting her look of pride smiled, and spoke up with joy in his voice.
[...You don't know that.]
He was so tired that he got a nightmare . He saw her mother she had white eyes and weak limbs she told her to not follow her dad and asked to leave it all . Then he was taken back in time where he was left unconscious and he saw her mother getting stabbed by the assassin he immediately woke up and he was sweating very badly , then he realised that it was only a dream and nothing had happened really . He looked around and then he looked at the clock it was 8'o clock .So he get up and made himself ready and went out of his room and saw his dad .
I very much enjoyed the journey so far, I very much hope you continue it. Thanks for all the hard work you put in so far!
A girl looking my age, with an unkempt long blond hair, pale skin, wearing frilly pajamas with red stains on it, and she has a pair of bat wings on her back.