interesting book, it's suspenseful and Awesome! one chapter is enough to make you wonder what's gonna happen next.awesome work so keep it up!
I first picked this up to skip time but I was soon so into it I ended up spending all my coins and fast passes so I'm on ch 66 and I want to read on but sadly can't. The story is amazing and also the character development. The mc isn't op yet a least which gives a sense of realism over all amazing novel and would deff recommend
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Nonhuman characters are more interesting when the human souls don't go to great lengths to pretend they're still human. For example, this jellyfish mc doesn't need to sleep. Ever. Still, he stops every night not because it's dark or dangerous to move around but because he wants to maintain the routines of humanity. It slows him down. And when he's traveling somewhere to do something while he's completely alone it isn't interesting, it's idiotic. You don't need to maintain your humanity to such a degree you refuse to take advantage of your new nature. And as of chapter 11 he's long since left the ocean behind and it doesn't look like we'll be revisiting it now that religions and villages have been introduced(A development that happened way too quickly IMO. We only just started exploring the ocean floor). So this story isn't very adventurous nor do we have any reason to put the budding sea monster on a pedestal anymore. He just doesn't feel legendary or mysterious now that's he's less than 1% of his original size and about to straightforwardly introduce himself. - This review will be subject to change as I continue reading but I wanted to warn anybody getting their hopes up that this story only just barely represents it's Cthulhu namesake. Pretty much all you're getting is a big jellyfish. And judging from the mc's empathy towards people he's going to be a copout "evil god". So don't expect any mind-melting horrors, death flags for entire continents and worlds, alien minds and etc. Just note that my current problem with this story lies entirely with an mc I'm beginning to dislike. I've seen people mentioning this story used to have translation issues but I haven't noticed anything yet so you should be good to go if that's what you're worried about.
If the description of the story looks familiar, it is because it's basically the description for rebirth of the thief who roamed the world, just less descriptive. If the story content looks similar, it's because it is exactly the same as rebirth of the super thief, the only difference being the quality of writing.
Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author.
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This is a very good novel so far with little to no cliches at all. MC is shown to be very intelligent,cunning, and cold. It updates on a daily basis which I appreciate a lot and I have very high expectations for this novel. I dont see any poisons and author is doing a great job!
To be honest I didn't really read this book AND it's probably good. I just wanted a fast pass to continue reading the book I'm already on. Sorry
The concept is great. But the story flow is so incoherent and random that you have no idea what is happening. Mc mining ores in a cave, devil girl drops onto his front. Mc running away, stuck in ground 10 feet under. It's so abrupt and random, no transition or explanation.Half the story mc is talking in his lalaland and readers have to make guesswork all the time what is happening. Is this the flashback or was it happening to mc now?So, in summary, it's confusing and the author is mostly talking to himself about the key points of the story. It is missing a lot of context and the transitions are not there.
READ ON ANOTHER SITE. I picked this up at least 8 months after it came to this site, it has 245 chapters uploaded, and at chapter 65 it becomes privileged chapters so unless you want to spend money unreasonably read on another site.As for the review of the book. It is not bad, but not fantastic either. Skills are not really expanded on and explained as much as I think it should. When the mc get at (or close to) level 100, he only has a few passive skills that anyone can get and a couple of class skills that are still passives but only he can learn due to the unique class. It does not really explain combat, he gets mining early on and has not used it since. He gets blacksmithing lessons from a godly skilled blacksmith and after making a couple of refined steel ingots, he makes an average sword and does not touch blacksmithing. It makes not sense that he does nothing with it when he specifically went to the smith to learn smithing.Other than that, the world description is poorly expanded. It introduces the four races in chapter 1, but they are not important at all and no information is given about them yet (only at chapter 65 after all). Not to mention, you barely know anything about anywhere, even in the human territories.Time is another issue that really screws with you. The author says it is something like a 1:4 time difference in the game compared to earth, but after spending 8 months in the game (plus time out of the game) he was only playing for less than a month. The numbers just do not add up.