You are a great author and I love both of your current books.
You have a amazing writing quality and really good story development.
The characters are well done and the Mc is likeable.
I think you should post daily otherwise the update stability is good.
The world background is interesting. He has a lot of knowledge about the world and is using it for his advantage. It will also be interesting to see how he interacts with people he has only read about like most of the heavenly opposers .
Tbh I think this novel is way too underrated... I love how unique is our mc personality the most. He may looks like a cinnamon roll but~~~~. I also like the side characters that also play an important roles to make the novel looks more unique and interesting... Cant wait to read about our mc and side characters backstory~~ Oh yeah! Will this novel have a lil bit of romance or it will only have mystery and actions? I asking this because well i kind of ship our mc with that computer genius ⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄ I hope there will be a romance even though it was slow paced one
Read until chapter 86. (The last one released)
Writing Quality: English is not my native language, so I don't have much basis for an opinion on that, but with my level of English I didn't find any errors that interfered with my reading.
Update stability: Every day there is a new chapter, in addition to several extra chapters, I have nothing to complain about.
Story development: At some points I feel it gets a little repetitive, sometimes the chapter is just about his routine with a slight difference from something that happened in one of his businesses, but the story is so satisfying that I don't prevented me from reading at all.
Character Design: Looks a lot like anime character personalities to me, a lively girl, an ice cold older girl, a cute and loving younger sister. There's no way to complain.
World Background: I loved how he presented the differences between the parallel world and our world, even explaining historical implications between the countries of the story world.
In the end, a clean 5 Stars review.
do you know any novels that are like this with the protagonist getting rich out of nowhere but he is not like those who are masochists and like to be offended? if you know please tell me
The story is def above average.
I like the early romance that is in the making (though they might get separated soon so whatever).
The power system and world setting is kinda well done, not sure if it's unique but feels fresh nonetheless.
Story was great till around chapter 120. the author looks to have changed or decided that the characters dEvelopment and relationships that formed previously, didn’t mean anything; e.g the 2 girls that were treated as part of his “family” or his assistants/maids, suddenly became outsiders that had no relationship with him whatsoever, other than as aquaintences. His personality and how he treated cultivators changed noticeably. Seems like they got someone to continue the story for the pay from Webnovel.
Even though I'm only a reader.
I need to say it's a pretty good novel.
it kept all night for few weeks.
In short - It is a very entertaining novel.
Mortal Physique – Lin Tian.
Spirit Ocean – None worth mentioning.
Spirit Palace – None worth mentioning.
Transcendent – Su Qingge, Ye Chen
Great-Transcendent – Elder-level Figures of the Azure Lower Realm.
Saint – Sect Masters, Patriarchs of the Azure Lower Realm
Conferred Lord – Young Supremes of the Upper Realm
Conferred King – Gu Changge (Middle Stage)
False God –
True God – Gu Changge’s hidden cultivation (Pinnacle Stage)
Heavenly God – None Yet.
God King – Old Ming, Aunt Xue.
Quasi sacred
Sage Realm – None worth mentioning.
Holy Realm
Great Sacred Realm – Yan Ji (Ye Chen's hot master) | Elder-level Figures of Ancient Immortal Families
Quasi-Supreme – None Yet.
Supreme – Gu Lintian (Gu Changge's Father) is either a Supreme or someone beyond that level.
Quasi Emperor – Ancient Immortal Families's Ancestors (gu family,ye family,etc etc)
Emperor
Immortal
I was just writing a novel with a similar premise ^.^,(Childhood friends are always ignored!) but yeah I have high hopes for this one! Hopefully it has good characters and plot!
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I Stopped reading this is where the mc is op but he is thinking that he is weak and the others cultivator thinks that he is an otherworldly expert living a mortal life type novel which i got bored of so no thank you
tho book is absolutely amazing