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If you are a fan of descriptive stories then this story is for you. The author is praiseworthy when it comes to portraying imaginative details.
The story also has a decent pacing although there are several grammatical corrections, all in all, the book is fun to read.
S. Capo´s Review (novelupdates)
This novel is discontinued or hiatus.
Great at first, then it became more and more nonsensical.
I love harems, this novel mainly focused on it. The problem is he has this bs way of dealing with girls, plus the author just sends girls here and there (either kidnapped or forced to marry someone or just pure bs going somewhere, just like fades on the background) just so that he can focus on one girl at a time.
Cultivation part is a bit confusing (cause his cultivation level is called differently from earth cause he came from a different world) but it is still ok at first then it also became nonsense in the end, cause of all the OPness and stuff. I get it, that the MC is OP and he can beat the crap out of anyone higher level than him but it keeps on repeating that over and over and over it became boring. Plus there is this plot armor which for some reason he cannot use at will (the author seems to refuse that it is a plot armor so he does this) but come on, it became really annoying.
The author tried to put different personalities to the girls but he forgot all about it later on until all the girls are the same where you cannot identify which is which cause they all act the same way (childish, jealous, sweet, gentle) good personalities but if a 28 years old and an 18 years old acted the same way in the same setting, it gets weird but bearable since I know it is hard to write a novel so I still appreciate the efforts, still I dont know why it is discontinued, possibly lost support but a good read if you just wanna find something to do when you're bored, but dont expect anything out of it, purely about harem, MC showing off how OP he is, MC beating the crap out of normal people. (MC actually fought more normal people than cultivators), author describing MC's handsomeness and stuff about his former world and cultivation and plot armors.
Nothing to expect from the story, even the bed scenes are bland.
The book indeed starts off interesting with the MC wishing to achieve his goal of entering medical school yet after getting there through a fortuitous opportunity turns into an apathetic twat, who really can’t be bothered studying or attending lectures as he is suddenly gifted with his martial medical knowledge. The character development for the supporting cast is quite decent yet the MC is just useless, his performance, his social skills and his general antipathy to everything and anyone unless it benefits him just makes him not that captivating as the main character.
I tried to stick with the story line but after chapter 165 I just had enough.
TL;DR : find another story to give time to.
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Raw link please ?
it is lovely
the Novel is great, the translator is even more great one of the best, but Qidian is the worst stealing other's work go to **********.com to read the chapters
This story is not for those who enjoy a fast paced, guilty pleasure harem novel, and skip from novel to novel to find anything to gawk at for having a ‘badass, cold and ruthless’ MC, who is just a kid trying to look cool in reality.
Translation Quality: 3/5
There are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, it is fine now, but it is still prevalent in the earlier chapters.
Stability of Updates: 5/5
2 chapters a day since day 1, with not a single minute of delay throughout.
Story Development: 5/5
Those who enjoy fast-paced novels won’t be a big fan of this. This novel is the most well thought out novel on qidian by a long shot. The author isn’t scared to take his time, and it is AMAZING!!! The MC can’t cultivate at the start, only at chapter 1?? can he do so, but as a fan of cultivation stories, this story has BY FAR THE BEST START OF A NOVEL and IT’S QUALITY DOES THE OPPOSITE OF DECLINING.
Character Design: 5/5
BEST CHARACTERS ON QIDIAN, you could pick any random character from this story, and make a novel on them that would be a big hit. They all feel so realistic and fleshed out, that you can’t help but wonder in awe in how the author wrote them so well. The MC is amazing, and DESPITE HAVING SUCH DETAILED AND REALISTIC CHARACTERS, YOU STILL FEEL HE IS THE MOST INTERESTING.
World Background: 5/5
Phenomenal. The world has a clear and rich history better than any other. The history feels like a real history that could happen in our world, except a few people have some small powers. Not much to say, just brilliant.
the story seems ok but the translation quality makes it very hard to get into the flow of the story as your always trying to figure out what is happening.
So far so good. The protagonist reminds me of the classic mc manga and anime. I want to see how the protagonist develops further. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Stop letting translator: 549690339 translated any novels, it a good novel and I enjoy it a lot but later chapter 40+ it want down the hall so pls stop this mtl translation webnovel
Not the most detailed or dramatic story most would expect. But pretty good for casual read, i think i enjoyed this one the most out of this batch