I'll give the world background a perfect five. Overall I will say the story has a good plot. The writing style is ok but you have to work with some errors. I am not good with grammar so I cannot spot them. But I noticed some errors in capitalization. You willhave to work on that. That's all! ???Hope you will continue writing the story.
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FL, Zou Ming is really a weird character in one scene she looks possessive and in the next she looks mentally disturbed.But the scene where she stripped herself in front of the mirror was really heartbreaking.Must read this book and author your going great keep it up!
4/28/23 Starting reading this book. So far it was good, hoping for the next Update..
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The progression is good. Increasing the power too suddenly would give a sense of fabrication. I just hope that there could be more stories with female counterparts with the same power levels as this.
The story starts off as cliché but gets very interesting, I can't wait for the MC to at least stop being an ugly, destroyed old man and become a tidy old man.
the novel is great, but really a shame that chapter 50 and upward the chapters become pay2read, guess this is the end for me ciao ciao...............................................................
Alternate Title: That Time I Got Reincarnated As A Good Boi.
I like how the story is going and don't think you should stop.So don't stop!!!I also don't really do review's which often means I like a story.