She quivered in fear as the voice repeatedly mocked and ridiculed her.
Shirohime : Please call me by my new name Shirohime...
The other two humans(?) approached - one was a tall male one could confuse for a light elf if not for his lack of the characteristic long ears and presence, the other was a person Albusflores couldn't exactly tell a gender to at first - but he or she had the sort of beauty that could tame unicorns in ancient times. The most dangerous kind of being. The kind, his ancestors had said, had led unicorns in Urea to perish and go extinct. Albusflores knew he should be most cautious, but he couldn't help but feel charmed and his muddled mind didn't help.
"Uhm." Zhi muttered with narrowed eyes as she studied the newcomer's plain, yet elegant, clothes and the thin jade rods keeping her hair in a tight bun.
thinking was over. He spun around and watched as Azailee stood up from his abrupt change in
I sincerely enjoyed the book. it is amazing and interesting. Am waiting for more updates. Thanks for the interesting read.
I really love it.For one, it has a cross-dressing female 2. It actually feels like it could happen, as in the problems that happen aren't just for no reason, there's actually a reason. Adding to that, the reasons aren't stupid.3. The main character isn't OP yet. She actually has flaws. And if she does have unusual strenght in something, it makes sense that she does as to say that there is a reason for her strenght. which creates a perfect character.4. Even the side characters, mobs, and cannon fodders are important. They have good reasons behind their actions and a solid character. This has got to be my most favorite book as of yet.
awesome work exactly what i wanted......
Its your amazing Author again, You guys must have noticed that I have changed some content and made little tweaks to the previous chapters. I have done this because the previous chapter were lacking in both quality and quantity when it came to words and plot etc.. so I had to take the bitter pill and I have been improving the previous chapters for the past 48 hours making sure there are no errors.
Like all Authors, I shall now rate my own work a perfect 5 stars. ? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The story's a lot more interesting than what I thought it'd be, the story sets a base for the protagonist to grow and doesn't immediately make her overpowered like other novels normally do. The main character is pretty interesting and the way the world is told in the beginning is good too. Overall a pretty good novel but it's just beginning so who knows how it'll turn out.
This is an amazing story and and you have a clear goal with where you want it to go and great world building and character development. I enjoy reading the novel.