Extremely derivative and bland background for the story.I couldn’t finish even the 5th chapter because it constantly tries to copy Solo Leveling or other more original power fantasy leveling novels. Writing quality is not good to say the least. At some points making it feel like a badly translated clone of Solo Leveling, which I could at least tolerate if I liked the premise and thought it could change to be different in an aspect from the standard. However; it does not deviate from the formula and could use an editor and much better introduction that can get the reader to stay for the development of the characters and storyline. As it is, the idea is uninspired and the writing is worse. For context, I immediately dropped any desire to read further after the decision to pick the daggers for the hunter test. Especially after the detail about the shadow making me think that this was just a Solo leveling fanfic.
Im currently about 80 chapters in and it feels like the writing quality has gone down a bit after each chapter. Writing quality - 2 -Pretty lackluster, overall "its in english" but the wording could be chosen better to create a smoother sentance. At multiple points the sentences will jar to a stop or end up be missing key words to make it flow right.Story Development - 3 -it doesnt seem like theres much of a plan at all, except "protect family. kill enemy." and whatever story is there feels patched together.Character Design - 2 -Not much to say there, typical OP MC that really is too dumb for his own good and is OP just to be OP.updating stability - 2 - none listed / week. granted there was a new update ~14hrs before posting this. Maybe it'll look up from here.World background- Legit feels like a ripoff of solo levelling meets latna: survival of a sword king.Overall i wouldnt say avoid this, but veteran readers be warned: this is a bit rough. Maybe it'll improve in the future, and if it does ill come back and edit this.
The story is getting so much messed up .The story depicts mc as some kind of saint do everyone good deeds without much return.I am very interested in the plot line of the novel but i am very disappointed by the direction the novel is going
the are so many character names start with Lin that you will be confused half the time there is no World building
Finally a science novel I'm sick of cultivation and magic novels most of them use something that belongs to the world to gain power and immortality but what happens when the qi or mana of the world runs out in what way do they keep their power. I hope he won't just depend on the system scientific blueprints and develop his on technology most MCs use the system for everything which is dumb makes me feel that the MC possess no IQ whatsoever
Its really an interesting story, with so much to learn, I can't wait to finished it ?. Nice work, please the daily upload should at least increase and be fast ????Thank you ✌
loving it .
The story is solid if a little bit cliche at times, sprinkled with some twist here and there. Character driven story is the theme of this novel instead of plot driven one. There are no adversary for self reflection the MC would face as his system practically make him Basketball Jesus. The conflict would be outside the court most of the time. This can be considered a weakness of the novel, or it's strength from a different point of view depending on the author skill to write such character.Although I fear a chapter so short for once a week release in the future after it catch up with the NBA arc would hamper the story. Rule of thumb, if you can see a chapter ending by a scroll from the bottom of your phone to the top most part, it might be too short all things considered.
I hope you can update more frequently!!!?
Amazing book! I loved the whole series and can’t wait to see what other books the muse puts out next. They didn’t disappoint at all and you become truly invested in the characters and their journeys.
interesting...I love it from the beginning it really sound interesting...I really love to read it to the end...Lovely Story...?????...
really..... one chapter...... ur killing me here.x