Jay_7772
Amazing Novel with great potential. Awesome Character development and world building with unique power structure.Including that MC actually have an ambition. Looking forward to the mysteries and kingdom building settings to be further explored.
The story development is quite slow paced and so is the updating status . Though it is quite troublesome to get a clear idea of MC'S personality or mindset. Sometimes the story feels to forcefully lengthened, missing its natural flow . But it still has a captivating storyline and background, making reading it enjoyable
just so in love wow would recommend this book to anyone looking for love and drama ? ? ❤️
Hello, readers! Author here. Please take the time to review my work if you haven't had the chance to. It isn't easy to produce content from such a sophisticated world that flows naturally. Obviously, it is compounded by the fact I am in my final year of university. Any tips/comments/suggestions to improve and I would be grateful.Cheers!
although takes a while to get started , it grabs your attention nicely in the later parts , amazing novel , you have to come back bruh, FAST
Please let them get married is about time they get lost in each other.
I think this is done quite well for an aspiring author. It is obvious that he cares for the world that he's building. I believe the author is trying to create a more original piece of work that tries to separate itself from common archetypes. Overall, I am both rooting for the author and the world they are trying to create.
Low rating because there are only 3 chapters. Writing quality is good so far.
Excellent, spell-binding, delightful characters. I could NOT put this book down. Song Yan and Fuyu Sheng are a delight the end is Fabulous!
"Okay-okay, now number 3 here, how many human toxid children are on this earth," I said.
(Rooftop)
Supreme B:you shall be my successor I bestow my power unto you
