TheLONGnose
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Novel that has bloodlines Aliens and nanites what else can you ask for oh right it has a System as well ????????????????ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=┌(; ̄◇ ̄)┘
Totally different from what I usually prefer to read but I have to say that this book is soo interesting and fun to read. Haven't quite read alot of it but I totally recommend it, good work author.
I have wanted to read books so I am reading this book because it it really good. And you don't know when something is good until it is gone. When I first started to read you book it took me on an adventure. I love to read books and it made me want to make my own books someday. I don't when I will do it but I will. I not not stop reading books.Some people say you are a bookworm becauses you love to read books. But who but those people who say that we are bookworms it is not a bad thing. We just love to read books.
I can't believe there are so many bad reviews that you guys made this rated as (3.1). My real rating would be a 4.5 but I will make a 5.0 to try to balance the rating. The story is very cool and I can't wait to see what happens next. The story went a little too fast for a story and could use some filler but overall I love it!
Good novel ..............................................................................................................................................................................
Translation was good . Yes this Novel have a real translator . Novel's background was good and had potential . But Subpar writing turn it into waste. Too repetitive feels, MC character also feels too one dimensional and I am losing interest .
Out of 3 of the novels I have read from this author(Otherworldly Cultivator, Zhang Fei and Primordial Dual Cultivator Dragon), I consider this one the best. Second being Zhang Fei. I feel this novel has more refined elements (Here I mean it has been revised many times) than his other works. I feel this is a GREAT READ. To the Author: I really appreciate that you write 3 novels together with Daily Updates on them. Great Work.
i read the title and still clicked on this novelso my expectations were pretty low but life surprises you every so often this has no plot and the comedy isnt even great for a quick laugh
Read 20 chapters and I gotta say this is pretty good as the mc won't become instantly powerful instead he has to slowly build it up. Also, there's an actually good dad in this novel
I like this new book alot. Different take on village building. Author also keeps MC grounded in his growth. it's not just OP as hell system shenanigans
Another novel with idiot protagonist. Seems good at the beginning then started to lose their way and seems to me like a waste of time. But I am me, so beware.
