Kok praising novel with useless tips on how to pick up girls. Very low effort novel with zero imagination. MC does not deserve his OP skills at all.
It's er gen's latest work and we all know how great of a writer he is! I was following the MTL before coming here and couldn't be happier that someone like Lordbluefire has picked it up. Hope u deliver another fantastic translation to us!
Now, I kind of liked how it is translated as "Beyond Time" everywhere else. Also, the novel has a dedicated cover in the CN version, so why use this third-rate one? Finally, please update the summary of the novel.
Good novel just the sister and brother relationship is weird and how the author hints at the romance between them is disgusting anyway everything is good but shame the author has these ideas
also if the novel Mc was the girl from the cover that would be fun but hey that's just me
It's still too soon for me to review since there r only 10 chapters so far that have been updated. But! I still have to say I love it. Great start n I love MC's character. Although it was too easy the way she died in the beginning but meh, all I care about is how satisfying it's gonna be in her journey to her revenge. It's pretty fast paced so far but in a reasonable pace (I hate slow pace btw). So far this story is really promising n make u feel curious for more. And I hope the Author keep it stay that way until the end. No pressure! Thanks for ur hard work n I wish for this story to keep updating much often. ^^
All in all, a solid novel.
There aren’t too many chapters so I can make a concrete review. Howver, from what I’ve read so far (30 chaps or so) I would say that it’s quite solid.
The concept is fun, the dialogues are nice, and the world background is also slowly starting to take shape.
That said, there are a couple of things that could improved.
Firstly, not sure if it was just me, but at some point you used an emoji, and my laptop couldn’t read it, so I was confused for a bit.
Could be just me, and it wasn’t really a big problem.
The pacing is fine since the world is starting to take shape, so no problem there.
Character is fine, but you what should be worked on more are side characters.
They do feel alive, but it can be slightly improved. Just give them more unique quirks, and some motivation and goals to which they aspire to achieve.
Anyhow, I really do like the story. Keep up the good work.
Needs work. More time spent fleshing out the storyline while also developing dialogue will greatly reduce how chaotic the novel feels IMO. This may potentially be due to english transation or english not being first language. Only read first 20 chapters and like the premise of OP shield MC. As the author gains experience writing should get better. Cover art is entirely misleading and should be changed ASAP!!! Good luck author i‘m rooting for you!
……. I read the story raw and it’s rubbish.
there's so many change in the story it's annoying.. like how the girl disappeared when the dog attacked, and when it stated that she did not saw him in the forest, when she talk to him on the tree
I had a big review but I accidentally pushed the back button, now I don't care, all I have to say is that the MC can't cultivate ever again and is just a mortal with a big(and broken) soul who can 'supposedly' as the author says it "cultivate in the new way" which is basically just non-sense about using runes... a.k.a talismans, which MC was the king of...
But now it seems I'm gonna have to deal with this ****ty package they've left behind, whatever
Hello, this is the author. I give my work 4 stars because I think there is always room for improvement.
I hope You like my work and if so please write a review.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I'm interested in seeing where this goes. Keep it up man.