had potential but was not properly developed I could tell he was trying to be mysterious but failed or could just be me
Heh, not bad. Haven't consumed much literature beyond this one, but it's decent. I'll pass it along to anyone who's into this stuff. For I am Vegeta the PRINCE OF ALL SAIYANS!!!
The novel lacked depth in character development and the plot felt predictable. It failed to engage me emotionally or intellectually, leaving me disappointed overall
I decided to make Yoru the one with the highest popularity by giving him 200000 points because he's best boy, Also here's 20 golden tickets since I never use them
really like this book！ so interesting！！！！！！！！
I like the story so far, and I think that It has a great potential. I also like the points of view that we have, we get to know the world around the main character a lot more. Looking forward to more chapters. Best wishes for more chapters and a great novel that we all can enjoy.
love it, the theme and story especially i really like vampire theme, not much novel with vampire theme with my taste. nskskdmmdmdkdmdmdndkdkdndmdmdm
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Writing Quality : I must say it was quite good on the first few chapters but no, grammar, spelling, it was all bad. Your way of writing is also very chaotic. You keep changing perspective per perspective, leave plots hanging, you leave to much information which sometimes becomes redundant. You need to bring this all together.Story Development : It was very good for you make Moku your mc with it based on your synopsis, but you made a bad move, you change thr main characters perspective to another. And also you cant't justify you word of making in as record of the orc civilization because halfway through the novel you change perspective to human development, history and all that, which give me irked. Its not even story anymore, its a book of description. The later chapters focus more on information dumps which Is very unlikable. Character Design : I dont't even know what to say, abandoning first main character perspective and just leaving it on the plot armour disgust me, I hate it. Authors like you are incompetent.Updating Stability : No CommentWorld Background : Clear and unclear at the same time. You give too much details but not description, you're writing is more of whats going on, not what it is or whatever it was.REMARKS: Anyway you probably fattened your chapters because money, idk what to say. But your writing needs more improvmement. If this is your first book then congrats, your grammar and english might not be much but atleast you bring a world for us readers not like those out-of-spite novels. I wish you good luck in your next book. And if you want to be a great writer, webnobel might not be for you, money shackles the mind Author. Thankyou.