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So far so goooooooooood....... But need upgradein on release system..
The story is pretty good with the MC going around catching pets, like in Pokémon Go, but with the twist that some pets have unique abilities. Would recommend.
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Super fun plot so far, and I’m only on 30. I excited for the rest of trial read. I love the intrigue and different magic systems. This has a ton of potential and will probably quite a fun adventure!
This looks like another incredible work, I know how much hardwork you put in this.
I will be enjoying this novel for the time being...
Anyways, goodluck author! I'll support you!
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
ممتاز وممتع وشيق وكل احدثه مبتكرة وطريقتة شيقة واسلوبه جديد اتمني يبقي في جزء ثاني عاشان اشتمتع بيه
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slow mc powerup + slow plot development + original fic w/o multiple daily updates = fic that will probably be dropped or delayed before getting finished. May as well read a translated novel - at least there are more chapters and faster update
I think the author has enough experience reading stories about cultivation. Seeing the writing that I think flows smoothly without breaking the flow. Great start to the first chapter. Unfortunately, the chaotic chapter structure is either due to Webnovel's fault or the author's, making the reading experience less enjoyable.
The use of uppercase and lowercase letters also affects the beginning of the paragraph and after the period. At least, webnovels have such a format.
I've read it all the way to chapter five, and it seems like the author needs to really pay attention to the chapter structure which is really messed up. A good story doesn't seem interesting because of that kind of thing. It is deeply regretted.
One of the best if not the best original story on this site recommend for all reader that like Op MC, eye power, xanxia, fantasy setting with mage/warrior, op background for M, time/space power , harem
I say the only problem i have is your Grammar?? i guess, cuz I'm kinda confused every now and then. But overall it's still passable, I'm still at chap 26 soo, still gonna continue!