PewkmonSb
Good! Good! Very good!
well after Earth arc is finished, ccp propaganda is pretty much gone (no more skin color bs)
Is everything alright? The beginning was quite lengthy due to the MC's system and the universe's rules. Sometimes, the MC's naivety and sluggishness frustrate me to the point of wanting to bang my head. He's also stubborn, refusing to stop until he hits a wall, then impulsively blaming and scolding the system that had given him advice multiple times. I stopped reading because I couldn't stomach how the secondary character was portrayed. The author portrayed the general as despicable, but then seemed to lose control. I'm curious about your thoughts on this quote: "Fu Zhan didn't try to reconcile because he knew he wasn't worthy and couldn't offer a future, so he remained silent." Do you think Fu Zhan was wronged by Wang Chen? In reality, Wang Chen wasn't deserving of Fu Zhan's efforts. Fu Zhan went to great lengths, even planning to elope, only for Wang Chen to betray him. How can one claim Fu Zhan was unqualified? Fu Zhan shouldered all the blame and suffered the consequences alone, while Wang Chen just left, becoming a monk and abandoning世俗 life. It's unjust to call Fu Zhan a scoundrel. It was Wang Chen who had doubts about their relationship, believing the arranged match would be better for his lover. Fu Zhan was willing to defy his family for love. I sincerely hope Fu Zhan finds a new love (ideally, with another man) who truly appreciates and supports him. And yes, it's relieving to see many readers, like myself, questioning Wang Chen's actions.
The reviewer expresses dissatisfaction with the novel's use of American slang and the altered manner in which the main character speaks, which they believe doesn't capture the essence of a Japanese story. They also find the transition from monologues to dialogues awkward and cringeworthy. Despite a promising premise, they strongly advise against it for those who might be sensitive, citing poor translation quality that appears disrespectful, especially when considering the author's likely writing style. The reviewer, who is learning Japanese themselves, takes issue with the crude translations and wishes for another party to take over or for the translator to remove the self-inserts and inappropriate language. They rate the book a disappointingly low 1 out of 5.
although I do like the story. I constantly feel like I'm reading the script for a manga or graphic novel in that the transitions in many parts of the novel as well as the weird lack of details seem to insinuate that there probably should be a picture series included
What's TAPOV?
His other novel was a short story, maybe a try at writting. And SS is his first long story, already quite good. While Reverend insanity was Gu zhen ren's sixth novel, and the best yet. Yup, g3 is definitely not as skilled as Gu Zhen and experienced, is that what you meant?
I'm gonna try reading this... Away from the brain rots, the soul wrenching, the heart piercing and the love craft novels...
(Ngl i need a break from all the gores and torturing novels... I think it's somehow affecting my personality a tid bit... fck... )
I understand him coming back, but his uncertainty and dabbling back and forth is very irritating
I think it's good but with the good comes the bad, the MCs first subordinate, her name changes every few paragraphs
If it didn't do that and the author was consistent with the names then it'd be great
But it's so annoying to see the leader of the place (MCs first subordinate) have her name change from Rachel to Quinn to Sarah to others and back
The ending was such a letdown. It was in the middle of the night and now I felt lost.
amazing story
