trash stories with mc have too much power and don't have good control (for writers it's been good). even having a lot of power can't keep his mind from being read by others, well I suggest you guys don't read this garbage.oh in this novel there is another reincarnation as fubuki waifu mc and fubuki easily reads mc's mind and mc divulges his secret even though mc has a Rinnegan which is very strong in guardingoh in this novel there is another reincarnation as fubuki waifu mc and fubuki easily reads mc's mind and mc divulges his secret even though mc has a Rinnegan which is very strong in guarding mind so that it is not easy to read
Good novel give it a chance it's about a mc with low talent getting transmigrated without a cheat. Only problem I feel is the unnecessary hype surrounding mc mysterious situation. I just read a fanfic where the author created hype about MC's father and didn't reveal him. And when the father finally got revealed, it was disappointing (he was revealed in ch 150).
Why bother with cultivating? just write:
[The boy was Secretly the All-Knowing, All-Seeing God; Creator of all Things]
The End.. or even just write your cultivation level to max level..
Guys you should really read the novel before judging. It really good
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Very fun to read. It's been the best novel on this site for me
that synopsis is suspicious af.... why does this look like a copy of a certain novel + some mix here n there
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Sypnosis is copy of tribe when the book isnt even about that. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Might be readable for some but not for me.
Here is an example of a situation of the novel. Our MC goes to sleep like a baby after jerk**g off watching his stats and he does that right beside 4 people that he doesn't trust in the least. One of them that he seriously beat and the others that he treat as cowardly ants.
Why did he do that? Well the truth is that he didn't think about it even a little. As our dumb arrogant MC said earlier, he is invincible if he has a little strength. What can others do?
It reads really well, definitely one of the best pieces I've seen written
Both the real world and the game world make you feel completely immersed and it's done extremely well.
i didn't feel stressed to learn or remember anything, it simply flowed,
If the author keeps this up we are going to have a book worth reading in the future
Writing Quality: Honestly Good and captures everything very well.
Story development: Plot is very interesting and the beginning I've read so far is very well done.
Character Design: Amazing so far!
Updating Stability: Seems good to me and has 30+chapters already!
World Background seems fantastic as well!!!
Good start. If this is Author's first story then yeah. The storytelling is good. Anyway, after reading the available chapters, you'll get curious about their past, What the heck really happened... Want to know more about the MCs... keep it up!
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