It was a fun read. It was slow in the beginning but I enjoyed it. The writing quality needs little editing. Sometimes you write information which is of no use. Like I was confused who was speaking. Try to cut down few sentences.Overall, I really liked the characters you introduced. I only read few chapters so I can’t comment but if I have time I’ll keep reading and then write full review.All the best author.
Translation quality drops to MTL standards after a hundred chapters without any interesting plot to make it worth struggling to read a MTL
Needs work. More time spent fleshing out the storyline while also developing dialogue will greatly reduce how chaotic the novel feels IMO. This may potentially be due to english transation or english not being first language. Only read first 20 chapters and like the premise of OP shield MC. As the author gains experience writing should get better. Cover art is entirely misleading and should be changed ASAP!!! Good luck author i‘m rooting for you!
Love this...This is piece isn't just of art, it's fine art.I would recommend my friends to read this.This is what I'm going to call "The Best of The Best"
It is truly one of the best stories I've read so far. The writing quality,pacing, characters everything is perfect. The only thing I am worried about is romance but it is still highly recommended
A fine cultivation novel, which clearly depicts the cruelty of the cultivation world and also shows the main character's inner struggles beautifully. It's very different from those cliche cl novels, where hot-blooded Mc's just go running around chasing dumb cats and offending arrogant young masters. All in all, I have enjoyed this novel thus far and hope it stays the same.
This novel starts a little shakey and the moral character of the MC seems questionable, but as it progresses those elements become less prominent. The novel is a pretty decent surface level look at a reborn MC exploiting his knowledge to become wealthy and powerful in Hollywood,. Its not super deep, but if you like American films and don't mind the occasional historical inaccuracy for the sake of the plot there's plenty to enjoy here.
Patently unique world, interesting spin on usual cultivation and system novel. Highly recommended to read. Very interesting water world, floating town environment.
Cliche. Peak cultivator reincarnated and gets “op” cultivation technique. Sword intent weak. Cultivation weak. Can’t even use past laws, weak. I’m sure that if your a god reincarnated but let his cultivation be back at the start. You will still retain your understanding of laws. So he can somwhat bend it to his will but not very much. But meh. Story so far is cliche. Also there is many words and sentences that is wrong and does not sound right to me. Before you post your chapters please consider editing it first.
Don’t want to be mean but this is so far my opinion of this novel.
Despite eastern fantasy is not my genre, I like this work. It has a certain potential. The character empowerment system is complete and well described. English grammar may be better, but I hope it will grow day by day. Don't stop writing, this novel may be a really good one!
just when things started goin better novel was dropped and announced to have a physical novel year later still no news I don't know if author died or disappeared mysteriously from earth
I truly found this story enjoyable, It managed to make me completely focus on it. I binged this story for a couple of hours. I hope this story gets picked, if it doesnt get picked i hope i can find it somewhere else.