I can't in good conscience recommend a story where they have 19 chapters locked that to me is just absurd. I also haven't seen anyone mention this which is even more absurd
Man.. I think its a bad idea to release 2 soccer novels at the same time.. Its a conflict of interest. Also, tbh I never watch sports anime, so I don't want to read sports anime either. But... I really want to read the fish novel lol... It looks like a stupid novel that I would enjoy.
Also why am I supposed to rate when there is no prologue or anything given...?
Review by chapter 269
I binged the story in the past few days. I decided to take a break before continuing the journey. I wish to write honest feedback before any recollection gets muddled. I am a very picky reader so I may be biased. I will go through my thoughts relative to other works expected from webnovel.
The author is passionate in what he does. He pushed himself everyday and relys on the readers for motivation. It is evident in his recent work that kept me reading unlike his previous work. For reasons I can't recall, I couldn't get past it's single digits. I'll be following his projects in the future the will surely be better.
Anyways, let get back to the subject.
The story is nothing special. A work one who enjoys the classic solo edgy beat em up would enjoy. There are certain aspects that makes it preferable compared to the rest. There is no mention of systems and 'skills/magics' are not explored anatomically. This allows for more focus on the story that many novels fail to understand. Characters are explored in more detail, monologues are more prevalent, everything one expects from a webnovel is there and more.
But that's where it ends.
The core of the story is set in flaws just like every other novel. The Mc has a questionable incentive, the world is nothing special/ doubtful perhaps and most character have a pretense of third dimensionality
Going into slight detail, the Mc's motivation mostly arises from a reoccurring nightmare. Personal ideologies push the Mc in pursuit of power. I prefer them to be more tangible/physical. It gives more substance to motivation compared to a drive derived from an unrealistic unbreakable will.
The Mc is perceived with a lot of flaws, the core of what makes characters alive. When the flaws are put to the test however, they never falter. It annoys me when it occurs in the story. Show me some weakness, sacrifice the mc's objective success and potential, loss friends, family because of these weaknesses. These weaknesses are bottled up and rationally explored for growth instead of exploding unfavorably for a more organic story. The Mc is a Mary Sue when it matters.
The world revolves around the Mc. No single action from characters can alter the perceived story like the Mc. For this reason and many minor others, characters don't feel alive and relevant even though some are explored in detail. Any given character has to be written like a Mc. That is what makes the world vivid and lively. Perhaps George is a fair character but the author Insistance on the Mc's solo action doesn't give him a chance to shine.
The Mc meets love interests at the beginning of each planet. The Mc relys on them for growth. I like reliance but they don't necessarily need to be love interests. It gets tiring.
For reasons mentioned above, the world inst exciting beyond the expected big bad needs to die. One example, the juxtaposition of Mcs enrollment in a military and his continued defiance of orders and relished freedom bothers me. Whether the military has reasons for them or not, it goes against the perceived realism associated to these associations. Many more occur in the story making it wacky.
It's a good read. Nothing exciting I would say.
I really like the story!
Keep up the good work.
Tbh I wish there were more novel like this..……………..........................................
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Website : qidian china
Views : 8.55million
Rating : 8.6(20)
Chapters : 2423
Status : ongoing
Word count : 5.23million
author level : great
No of works : 1
Comments : 493
Year started : 2016
My original recommendations :
Dadaelus : one of the best novel I ever read online and offline with superb grammar and awesome author bcoz he rejected the webnovel contract and gonna keep it free.
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after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .
definitely give it a try . nice concept, good character development, great one of my favourite novel nice development and story line really good.
Fellow Game Genre Author Here!
I have my own book that I'm writing in this genre with a similar start and I can tell this author is going to take a new route and divert from cliches. At least that's what I see so far @3 chapters. I wanted to take my game novel a different route and I am happy to see that someone else is doing the same! I am very curious to see how innovative this book gets. Because we need creativity and fresh ideas.
As for the update frequency, it's still too early to tell but I will add to my collections so I know when he updates.
His writing, story development and character are looking good so far.
As for world building, I hope to see more in the future. I want to see how he builds his/her game world.
It's still too early to tell if we will be getting a proper game world so I will not deduct any star for that at the moment.
It's a thumbs up from this bro!
I like it, but the slice-of-life nature + an Overpowered MC doesn’t make for interesting writing. If there were more comedy I could bear with it, but it’s not that funny.
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