"you coward! you were with those insects!!"
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Awsome book so far. This book is so far more than fantastic. Really interesting concept and the way the book is written is great and well readable. I can't wait for other chapters to kick in. Looking forward to continuing to read this book.
i really liked the story,grammar can improve significantly,but it is understandable to enjoy,my biggest issue with this story is i you haven't used "" when characters speak which makes it a problem when reading
The first chapter is so tragic, and it adds spice to your story! I hope the chapter will be long?
Although, I do not read this genre but the way it has been written by the author is quite good. I really like the writing style. One thing I'd like to point out is information dumping in one paragraph. It diverts the focus otherwise everything is pretty cool about this novel. I'd definitely recommend this.
If you love MC with Treasures and with loyal subordinates and kingdom building the this novel is for you.I like the mood of the story and it's progress is not fast nor slow just smooth and fine.The way the situation portrayed is great even the dynamic actions are detailed that you will imagine the scene to your head.Overall this is one of my favorite type of novel,great work author. Looking forward for the upcoming chapters.^_^
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For short story, this story is quite entertaining. I like the development and the ending is good for all individuals.But overal, i like the story. Please keep writing. Thanks ???
Nice work my former classmate, keep it up to reach your goals, inspire others and always enjoy making novel like this ?. I hope that you understad what I said ?. I fully recommend to read this novel ❤, and I hope that this novel will be number 1 soon! Godbless?
every time i see Olivia i get cringe and I hate lesbian relation it is too weak, please don't use these relationships takes reader out. And I hate it.
I thought this story is about cyborgs, but not. It is about humans.A great plots with interesting characters, and I am so curious about what would happened to these protagonist humans.