The story has a promising plot and a very relatable main character.
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i am honestly wouldn't ever read stuffs like that unless i am a Chinese cause the more stuffs you read like this the more brain sieze would u be ! or maybe the opposite but i don't really want to discuss much about it just plane nationalism nothing else i
A common discussion about gun ownership is whether it should be universalized. Everything in the MC world is a potential weapon. Including the MC himself who can be tamed and turned into a weapon against his loved ones. Once that risk exists, no one works or produces food, and the tamers eat the battle beasts. Isn't that the real story on the pokemon continent?
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Review after the 45 free chapters -
I am confused on how much I should tate this novel. While I found many parts of the novel cringeworthy, like mc being a simp in beginning, or every person in the city being stupid, just trying to humiliate mc and his wife, and mc getting massive powerups from the system within just days, these all things make the story cringey.
Still there are some things I like in the novel, like the pacing is good, and writing quality of author is good, that he made me look forward to even such cringey story. Also, the romance is good, the heroines are not the conventional female archetypes, which I like.
My only suggestion is - improve the pacing of story even more by making non necessary fights even shorter, like the fight with goblins.
... punches MC in face since she is naked on top.... MC explains he saved her life. She thanks him. They end up flirting, hugging, kissing and she says "Be gentle" ... Seriou...?
Few things to know before reading-
1. The start is a little rocky since this is my first novel, but as I write more I improve just as much.
2. This novel takes inspiration from countless novels like TAP, TNE and many anime like MHA etc. I mashed together the tropes I liked best and the result of that is this novel, even if there are some similarities the plot is completely different.
3. This novel does not contain harem.
4. Please be gentle with your criticism, I'm very fragile (because I'm a carrot)
5. The MC is not likable in the beginning, I made it to be like that, but like all of us he too is changing constantly, growing through experiences.
6. Thank You For Reading.
Nice story.... This author really has a good potential l must say..... And what l can say about his writting skill, its really really good.....
Keep going author...... I am really impressed by u....
Well I have to say the story is interesting, writing style and humor is good. Currently at chapter 4 I bing read 3 about to go for 4th really good job author
So let’s give up for this Jolie character ?And I’m just gonna assume Lin Lin is a Gemini , love him to bits.Dear shameless author you have won my heart.Keep up the good work.Waiting for the face off between Daddy Ran and Mu Mu??It’s gonna be fun.
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Honestly just by reading the summary alone, almost all the pilot reads look like shit to me.
Especially the system ones.
Whats the use of an OP system ?
The MC will get everything he wants and
doesn't have to work for anything.
I don't know, sounds pretty boring to me.
Novels with Op systems are just boring and repetitive filled with arrogant young masters, retarded MC that has low EQ and no common sense along with repetitive face slapping.
Anyway If you want to read a good Horror + Cultivation novel I suggest you read
恐怖修仙世界 (Horror Cultivation World)
I read about 50 chapters in Google translate and honestly it’s pretty good. I wish WuxiaWrld or Webnovel or someone started translating it.