A good start to a well written novel. Looking forward to more chapters ?
This is a must-read novel if you into sword, magic, fantasy, and demi-human with no system. The author did a great job with descriptive world-building, characters have a personality, and the plot is on point with great logic. This novel has the potential to be a harem since it introduces a lot of waifu so far. Overall this novel is a hidden gem and very enjoyable to read!
The author is the incarnation of lazyUpdate more or ur ghey?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I just love how evil is the mc if you’re not into violent bloodthirsty and ruthless then it’s not for you I like how introduce the characters but I don’t like that much the it all mc sometimes it annoys me as for writing quality English is not my main language but I find it pretty easy to read continue like that author-san I love your story
The dialogue in this book is what sold me. Both characters have such distinct voices and the banter between them is genuinely funny without feeling forced. Her internal voice is chaotic and fast—full of tangents, self-interruptions, and dramatic reactions. 'Wait… the meaning of being human? Isn't that a bit too abstract, too philosophical? You've already gone into philosophy? I knew reading too much could be dangerous!' This is someone who thinks out loud and doesn't filter a single word. Her dialogue feels like watching a golden retriever describe a dream. Oda's voice is the perfect foil. Short, flat, almost robotic. 'Mm.' 'Okay.' 'I don't know.' But the author is smart about not making him a one-note character. When he says 'Now… I feel a little happy' after receiving the manuscript paper, it hits so much harder because he barely speaks. That one line does more emotional work than pages of dialogue. The best exchange has to be: 'How about I call you Little Oda from now on?' 'Oh.' …Is this going a little too smoothly?! Their dialogue also reveals their relationship dynamics perfectly. She's always testing boundaries, asserting dominance, trying to figure out where the line is. He just... accepts it. 'Mm.' 'Okay.' 'Oh.' It's either genuine simplicity or assassin-level adaptability, and honestly I can't tell which and I'm obsessed.
Obligatory review from the Author -> As obvious from the cover and synopsis, this is a high fantasy novel with unique plot elements and lore.Don't read this novel, expecting a one-punch man or something. It might start as a typical weak to strong but it is the MC's journey that matters here.Unlike most cultivation novels, where the MC simply jumps levels every dozen chaps or so, here each step of MC's power progress would be explained and satisfying.And all the characters would be developed well without making their interactions looking bland or make them into 2-D characters that serve no other purpose other than being there for the namesake of being side characters.Because of this, the plot progress wouldn't be rushed nor would it be dragging. I have tried my best to make this novel seem immersive and tried to avoid my previous mistakes of info dumps or tried to make sure that they don't break the reader's immersion.The MC may or may not be OP at the start and depends on reader's perspective. But one thing I can tell for sure is that as the time passes in the novel word and MC gains progress, his uniqueness or specialty would start becoming apparent.The worldbuilding is also completely unique and I take pride in that fact since I brainstormed the concept in this novel a lot including the novel universe.Those who are patient enough will enjoy this read while others who are looking for a one-shot MC who jumps realms every 50 chaps should look elsewhere, thank you :DPlease leave a review about your thoughts and don't forget to vote if you took a liking to this novel.I could really use the support of you readers since this novel is under a contest and could help this novel stand out!Thanks for reading this long review ;)P.S No harem planned so far but expect good romance + bonus R18. So, kids who want to remain innocent stay away from these chaps.P.P.S No toxic comments entertained. If anyone wants to leave constructive criticism, I will be happy to accept it as long as it's polite or friendly.
So apparently if uou stick to it it's a vood story... and the premise is nice, but oof the writing style is wanting. It's not bad English or anything like that. It just feels like the author slapped some words on a piece of paper and moved on. No flavour. Calling it a writing "style" is a stretch.But if you don't care about that, go ahead and read. The story is better than other stuff I've read (so far).
Overall its pretty good, however, I'm so confused as to how it goes from being about using runes to using beasts. Had it gone from using just runes to using both runes and beasts it would have made more sense.
Great novel, the premise of it is good. The Grammer could use some work and some parts could be further refined to explain things better and fill in the few plot holes, but overall the story is very good
Worst of time,too cringey,the worst mc I have ever seen in my life?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
i love how every each character of the story is going through, there a lot of inspiration n pasion though. its make me crazy n want more chapter been update soon, cant wait. tq author
there is already a manhua of it. it's called I have 9 female disciples, it have around 200 chapters. there is already a manhua of it. it's called I have 9 female disciples, it have around 200 chapters.