for review fpI love reading about the apocalypse
I feel so connected with your writings ?? Your descriptions make it easier to visualize the scene ??
needs improvement ? really confusing a lot
Not a big reviewer, but since it's relatively a new story comments / reviews help. The first ~65 chapters are very solid for a webnovel book, then it falls off just a little. If the synopsis interests you, the book itself lives up to it so you'll likely enjoy it. Interesting & well written MC, and FMC (Nyx - other two so far...eh.), great world building, etc. The writing is done quite well too, little to no grammatical errors. The downsides - romance leaves a bit to be desired, though it isn't bad, outside Nyx it feels forced, though it's still near the beginning so hard to say. Can see some silly tropes being used/setup as plot advancements, leading to the 'forced' feeling, imo. The second reason being story/plot pacing is inconsistent at points. Either way, worth the read.
I just gonna say, Really amazing storyline and how the characters are designed, it really cool and totally amazing ..I simply love it and the book too??
How not, the homework its be quite difficult for us to do alone and the homework was gived yesterday.
"We believe it was dewdrop...we think that's how she got in, the wall was weak it just crashed right through…" ronnok said stoically.
Naraic whistling to himself as he strolled down the road keep an eye out for the white building he was told about, saw a couple of carriages crash together and spill contents onto the side of the road. Some people were trying to help while others were trying to pocket coin and whatever else they could get their hands on. However, Naraic not bothered by the troubles of others, decided to ignore the commotion and continue onto his destination as he was on his journey. Kabbol had wandered round bends and through alleys before reaching the hill. Somewhere that seemed to be untouched by the cold, up on the hill under the great maple tree sat a single figure bound is leather armour with a hat too big for the head slanted forwards masking all features from the face. Only thing allowed to leak out was curly blonde hair which fell down to her chest, with the sound of children playing as two kids ran around from the back of the tree, seeming to play tag. As Kabbol claimed up the wood logs which trailed out a path towards the tree the figure lifted its head slowly, letting out a voice filled with both tranquility and and a sense of threat. "That's a new face, here to stay?"
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That's the way I like it and I never get bored
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
The water's getting warm so you might as well swim