Made me chuckle a couple of times, a good read. The MC is very innocent and makes it makes for a good laugh. The system is also interesting since it reminds me of a game that might actually exist within our current age.
The concept is good but the story progression gets stale as I read along. The romance in this novel should've been removed altogether as I find it moot. Main character's personality is poorly written and weak. Not worth the time. Unless you're a teenager.
Hope to read your next novel in the future.
Okay so this whole arc is just... chef's kiss. Let me break down why the plot structure here is genuinely satisfying. First, there's the dual storyline that the author is weaving. On one hand, you've got Qin Su preparing for the jade auction in Country M — this is the setup for her spiritual cultivation progression. She's entered the Qi Refinement stage, she's calculating her forty million yuan budget, she's thinking strategically. This is the 'hero preparing for the next quest' beat, and it's executed cleanly. But the REAL plot gold is the Zhang Ming storyline. This greedy uncle who cursed his own niece for her house? He's such a beautifully written villain because he's not some mastermind — he's just pathetic and greedy. And that's what makes his downfall so satisfying. The curse mechanism itself is clever. You need birth date AND a medium (hair, skin, something personal). That's worldbuilding that feels earned, not arbitrary. And the fact that the curse caster suffers backlash when broken? That's karma as a plot device, which ties everything together thematically. Then Zhang Ming, after failing to curse Zhang Yunqi, pivots to scamming an elderly wealthy man (President Su) into selling him apartments. He then uses that money to buy a villa from the SAME President Su at a bargain. The dramatic irony here is delicious — he thinks he's outsmarting everyone, but he's walking right into Qin Su's trap. And the ending? They wake up in a graveyard with their villa GONE. Not damaged, not haunted — literally removed. This is the payoff of everything Qin Su set in motion. The plot is tight, the cause-and-effect chain is clear, and the revenge is poetic without being gratuitous.
Love this book!!!
hope Dylan kicks Colton's butt and destroys Stephens father for their cruelty to Darcy plse more updates love this book
absolutely love this book! Thank you Cassandra.
the book was good overall, but the reason for dumping her seems stupid
I'm dying for the next chapter
just check your chapter pls...
good book!
Loved this book so much! Please tell me your planning to release in paperback too???? ......