Not really worth your time. The MC finds a chat app on his phone, of people discussing topics as though they are gods. The app comes with store he can buy cultivation techniques and other mystical objects from, using points he gains in the app. The MC's world is a technological one, but also organized around cultivation, and he's originally talentless. From the app and group he gains OP cultivation techniques and opportunities. However, he continually says everyone in the group is deluded for calling themselves gods, despite the inexplicable system and existence of the app itself, and shamelessly shares earth objects and cultural creations like quotes and poems and paintings to give the impression to the rest of the group that he is the highest level existence in the chat. This ever-present superiority complex makes the already quite bland plot difficult to stomach for more than a few chapters at a time.
Hey, nice system story. I have also tried novel making something ( albeit first time), hope you'll like that. I appreciate the good work and creative of author.
This is awesome!!! Got intrigued after reading the first five chapters, the characters aren't bad and after analyzing the plot, I feel it's great... Just some minor mistakes or should I say grammatical errors which I believe with time, the author will correct and make the more awesome.
Above all, the book is highly recommendable!!!!
I think I have to give five stars at everything since it only has one chapter for now. Although the chapter dumped a few information about the reader's needs, it was still an entertaining read! kudos for the author!
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Based on the numerous comments I've seen in this work, I believe it's appropriate to write another review.
First and foremost, I apologize if you find too much jargon in this tale. I'm not trying to appear clever, but I'd want to find an easier way to explain my views. I don't want to beat about the bush with many words and wind up in this cycle of explanation, so I'll use one or two vocabulary to explain my idea clearly.
Another aspect of this work is its formative stage.
The first stage involves the MC interacting with himself and the outside environment. The MC depicted his perspective on the world and the people around him.
The approach may be self-serving and hence cause readers to dislike the MC; nonetheless, his paranoid vision of the world is due to his experience.
The interaction of the MC and other characters is the book's second phase. With time, I fleshed out all of these crucial characters and provided a memorable encounter that moved the narrative ahead.
The world is the final stage. I brought the world to life by bringing forth the viewpoint of invisible characters to move the plot ahead.
This novel is primarily about intelligence and brain use. Although it included martial arts, that was not the focus of the novel (at least for now). However, martial arts will play a crucial role in the plot's conclusion.
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I like the characters and the story, I like how the Author arranged everything.
it's good, I like the concept of Amnesia in a game and it's time reversal power. This novel has OP MC so there would be more plot armor and insane luck I guess.
good story if déjà vu with another story. hope it's picked up again. if only for the in story down putter characters get 'face slapped '