Well developed world and character. a satisfying end and reading experience . logical power levels and character development. the only possible minus is the lack of romantic development, but since this wasn't the focus it is more than acceptable this lack .
Just update more, I want to get to the meaty stuffs. It is a bit slow for me but the writing is good so I am staying here for now.I think it become interesting after like 30-40 chapters.
I went back and fixed the first chapters. My writing has improved compared to before. I use grammerly so there isn't spelling mistakes but I might still have some. I release chapter's Friday and Saturdays now sometimes Sunday. I hope you all like the story try it out and I would really appreciate you all reviewing my novel.
Mtl story, can't understand anything...
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world building, character development e.t.c is good. But the only problem is author needlessly tried to streach the story as much possible. I will rate the story 3 out of 5. Here is an exampleSpoiler-Look at ch202 he just said same thing colorfully with different words- "that after 1 month he met the condition to evolve the skill which he thought was impossible before 1 month". This single sentence streached to entire chp.
This story is amazingly detailed very underrated!!!!! Highly recommend it to all!!! Thanks author for everything so far and keep up the good work? I can’t wait to read more?
I'm really obsessed with this novel ...️...️...
My heart goes out to her she doesn’t need to be treated this way at all I was really hoping that she was going to have a happy beginning but I guess we’ll just have to wait and see
Thank you!!!
great books, I wish more chapters will be release.
100 percent good story