This novel is fking horrible..go to the future and met girls and play with them..and then go back to the past and act like fking ruch wimpy kid with some strenght and play around with girls without considering their feelings..what the actual fk is wrong with the author..this is so disappointing...althou i like harem novel..but having harem while not understanding his women feelings and go there and there act like somekind of supreme is just bull****...and his rresources all came from other people..hes not even hardworking and just keep playing around thats why hes fking poor before he bcom rich..i actually hope that he work hard and spend more of his time with girls..upgrade his strength and their bond ..but instead..play around and talk some good words and the girl fawn over him..truly brainless author.. Plus what the fk with Islam girl joining the harem..this is just an insult toward Islamic religion and especially she had to convERT...this just an act of betrayal... This kind of action is jusy blasphemy.. Ima drop..trash novel..much racism
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Amazing so good i scream when there is a new update does need a little bit of work on the writeing and spelling but overall great story can't wait to see the next chapter 5 stars ??????
Guys if you are a fan of harem and good seggs ...then read this one ...Writing quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Story ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Sex quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Explanation ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Characters.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
AHH, new author here!, my writing quality isn't bad, and my updating schedule is a bit shaky, but I promise you a good read........pls support me
given that it is a translation I am certain that the bad opinions have been deleted if you can tell me if after a hundred chapters we start to see the Asian names again or if the cultural sentences which are not understandable in another language remained for understanding thank you.
The plot is excellent and the fact that you created a new power system I loved it, I like it when an author innova tes. What I don't understand is because he is a kapitan and not a captain. This was translated by google translator. PD:good job
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I really love this novel, the world building, the tweak you did with the beast types (clever, very clever)though I don't love seeing that harem tag though that's the only thing spoiling his story for me.
There aren't enough reviews. Well, I'll write something myself. At the moment. I also ask you to be more tolerant, after all, this is my first novel, besides, my English skills are not good and I periodically have to use an online translator, I hope you will understand. What do I want to bring with my work? Yes, in general, nothing, I just read all the good harem novels that had a fairly large volume, and I got bored, so I thought- " I'm probably not the only one, maybe at least I can help others brighten up the gray everyday life?". That's it!
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I know The Synopsis is messed up, Here you go.Short: Seems like the mix of 48 Hours a day and The devils cage. Mc is a martial artist, He uses his head, and doesn’t cower. Very realistic. But he has Leukemia. Basically a story about a sick Mc getting a chance to be cured by participating in something. He doesn’t know what is going on. He gets thrown in a world (1986 HongKong) to complete mission and gain points to use the cure. They are called “Yanfu Walkers”. The world seems really interesting, The “Gods/High level entities” are monsters or myths from ancient china (Vermilion bird etc.). So far it seems like there will be a lot of things happening in the real world too and not just the “Game”. Basically other than the Translator translating exact words, And a little confusion during dialogues, This novel is great.Long: World: It is believed there there is a Yanfu tree, And our world in one of the fruits. Our world AKA our timeline. Each fruit has a different timeline/World. Like how the parallel world theory works. And The people who can travel between this worlds are Yanfu Walkers, Like our MC, Who go to different worlds to do missions and earn point and level up. From the looks of it, This world will have historical Events with a touch of magicalism, Nothing Scifi yet as the tag suggests. I will not go into detail of each world. Too much ??u200d♂️MC: MC is a martial artist. He is usually Calm, Makes use of everything doesn’t have that take pride, Doesn’t cower. And quite realistic about his situation too, Is ruthless when needed, And kind otherwise. He doesn’t have that fake righteousness. (MC kills someone in a fight, And doesn’t justify it, and knows that it’s either him or them.) So far I like his choices, He does make some mistakes, But nothing big. The best thing about him is he uses everything, Lies, Cheats, Kills, and even bows down a little. Unlike those stupid MC who act straight as hell, and the plot armour saves them because “The didn’t bend”. ?Side Characters: Great side characters, During the first world, The side characters have a lot of power, Not like the usual where MC solves everything even if he is against a god. They also have good back stories. And learning how they are in an actual world they might meet the MC again.It’s a good novel, You should at least read 46 chapters to get everything cleared up, That’s where MC learns about stuff. The terms might be a little weird because sometimes the translators puts direct translation. The game system structure is also a little confusing but nothing that might make you want to just drop the novel.