waiting for more chapters. ..........
Oi tava muito bem para um maga assim me divertir muito bom o protagonista da história..........
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Meh
I’ll be straight up. I’m addicted to this novel. It’s so good at keeping your attention while also making you both happy and angry sometimes. The characters are good so far while the MC hasn’t been anything to special yet I have a feeling he’ll become something great. The world so far has been interesting. This novel is building up to be amazing and I cant wait for my chapters.
Weren hasting-rewenyou
Karnwalis-sthyi vumi bandobast
Velejli-sahayak sandhi
Viyam banting-sati pratha
Dalhogi- rail,Dak ,tar,lok nirman vivag
you really created something that I really liked, brought the idea of the system to the real world, I apologize if I did not write correctly I do not have English as the main language
This is seriously messed up.
The translation quality just destroys the reading experience
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It's my first time reading a novel like this and I wasn't disappointed. The writing is clear and straight to the point. I could follow what was going on so great work.
The novel itself piqued my attention to read more because it was written rather effectively. The general point of view was the one thing that did slightly perplex me. Why does that matter? However, aside from that, it was a good novel; keep up the good job.
Loveable cast of characters.
Plot twists.
Philosophical.
Psychological.
The story has been going amazingly well.
My favourite things about this web novel are the characters and the phenomenal use of symbolism.
Keep up the good work.
First, the very first thing you said about you no being an author or dreamt of beibh an author in the very beginning, caught my attention. I love honesty and how you opened up to we readers about everything, I loved it. I'll even say, even if you don't have a proofreader or editor like you said, your writing supercedes those who are authors in fact. I'm giving this review from my heart and I'll scream a million times that I love this book. This is actually a book I'd recommend to those who love sci-fi, thriller or the rest. It's a book I'd recommend to all Webnovel readers. Sometimes, I wish it was a movie itself.
I'm beyond words to explain how to tell you how much I love this book, you're just too good and the characters and everything well placed. You even dedicated a chapter to me