I left a review on chapter 38 and thats my honest opinion. I lobe the ideas in this novel and hope it doesnt get dropped. Ill update my review if i see improvements.
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Honestly, I’m only a few chapters in, but I can say that I’ve really been enjoying the read. As long as you overlook a few minor spelling mistakes, everything about plot, characters, etc. is great. It often seems random, but in a good, natural way.
Enjoyable story so far and a MC who uses his mind and not just his fists,( though he's not at all shy or even hesitant about bringing the pain.?).
Good Story but only 1 chapter a day. For Me the title is damn cool. I hope You won't drop it.???????????????????????
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Grammar 2/5Surprise surprise, another novel with a good idea only to be a weapon of grammar destruction.Your sentences don't make sense and you don't know how to interconnect conversations. You think that only with "bla bla" the people will understand who the **** is talking. But no, it doesn't help. Not even one bit.Not even that, you don't put descriptions on the dialogues, so most of the time I imagine 2 persons speaking like robots.ALSO!!! Can you PLEASE stop using Chinese additives to names? Nobody understands them and nobody likes them. Updates 4/5A lot of small chapters to build numbers, not something surprising. But a thing most authors do to gather people.Story 3/5Cliche after cliche. The school beauty falls in love with him the first time they meet because of a drawing he drew because he liked her smile. ok...wtf dude.Mother/Father believes his son no matter what. And they suddenly gained powers, What effects would make in their life? In their daily lives? In their work? Interaction with friends? No mention of them at all.Best friend and him always talk with the sentence "Bro
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Is the guy behind the tree the same one she saw in bus stop. The how did he vanish all of a sudden and where did he go? The driver was sure that he hit someone but theres no one there
SO IS THIS BOOK DONE OR WHAT?? ITS BEEN AWHILE SINCE NEW CHAPTERS WHERE PUT OUT!!
first of all, don't make this cringe, and second of all give it some slice of life moment to enjoy the world and make the mc have some level of common sense,don't make him like [ you dare to hit me now I kill you literary] don't make him have a harem, and most importantly don't make him unsatisfied with what he gains,make him smart where he uses the most efficient way to increase his power,don't give the skip training instant power moment, in this kind of novel progress of every moment make us happy and make him smart enough to finding new way to make him strong and earn some money.if you are saying that it became suspicious then I will tell you some thing instantly attaining power is more suspicious and if he work other area and work on his power he will gain power and money and most importantly knowledge and experience.
only read about 24 chapters so far as of this review but idk man I've thought about dropping this story a few times now, story itself is pretty good, nothing too amazing but a good read with deferent pacing. My real problem with it is that yes it has the stupid obvious plot armor that we all have come to expect from the novels on this site but what's really getting to me is that not only does author introduce language specific terms from a handful of languages like chaebol (Korean) and nii (Japanese) among a few others, grammar is just as all over the place. wish author would just stick to one or two languages and focus on Grammer, I'm gonna be surprised if I make it to ch.100 lolMy advice to author really is to reduce the amount of languages and focus on Grammer