This novel is very well written, especially I am very satisfied with the pacing which many authors struggle with which is quite surprising. If you have time and you want to read something refreshing, give it a go.
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had a lot of promise at the start but winds up boring in the latest chapters. I'm sure if it goes on it will get more interesting and entertaining but the current arc is super lame. it's basically a super boring non eventful wuxia novel at this point.
Just like the intro said, this novel is a very good novel like Lord of the Mysteries, First Order and Sword of Daybreaker. I can't to read this novel but I wanna read this when the chapter reaches atleast 500
I loved it very good, incredible, the story and plot are very good and the plot twist very interesting, I really liked the character of the protagonist and the heroines, the harem very good, I recommend it More will not be regret
The most annoying mc I have ever seen. It was all fine at beginning when you come across his heaven defying talent but I think the choices he makes are really bad even after he had a century worth of life experience. This annoys me to no end.
I read the 590 of Spirit Cultivation just to see that she didn't stay with Liu Mei, someone who has read these 300 tells me if the MC already stayed with Mei or already pressured Wu.
i have to ask, does this stay team focused? just got to chapter ~140+ and tbh the whole team dynamic thing really isnt for me at all. despite the preddy gud writing and super cool world building, i really dont want to read about the mc dragging an entire 4 extra people /everywhere/ across the seven seas or whatever. came here for cultivation unda da sea, not chinese onepiece with fish. not that theres anything wrong with that. just not my style.
The quality of the writing is over all alright there are a few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing that can't be over looked. The stability of the updates is pretty consistent so not much to complain about. The real downfall of this story is the characters and their development, and by development I mean the lack of it. The characters frankly are boring and very 2d most of their personalities can be described with a few words such as, mean and money hungry, talented and ignorant, genius and quiet, and for Ao he has nothing other than being the only other guy in the story. The story development is also very bad it is mostly the same over used jokes and the protagonist getting bullied by his so called friends. The Mc is supposed to be smart but then makes the same mistakes over and over again, and then it is just labeled as a joke. The one thing that makes the Mc unique, other than his race, is almost instantly given to his friends and they are only slightly slower than the "genius" mc. This story had so much potential, and I really enjoyed it at the stat but then the repetition of the same thing made the story get old real quick. As a suggestion to the author pleased do not keep forcing the same jokes, build on the characters more, give something to make the mc unique again, other than his race, allow the mc to grow and learn from his mistakes instead of repeating them. These are just a few things that could be done to improve the over story. Once again I love the concept of the story and the beginning was great, it just never let the characters to be built cause it to get boring really quickly.
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I rate this story 5/5 it has a great plot and has pretty good character development in the early stages which is good and I like how the story line is unique a little in its main purpose. The updates are late but I found out why so I won't be deducting any points from the score. Other then that I can't wait for future chapters and I wish the author luck for this story.
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