Horrible. Audience around him all the time, all his powers are exposed, everyone knows who he is in real life, women surounding him, he joins the country’s army and heavy nationalism (usually I do not mind but it’s pretty annoying in this novel).
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Wow, a quality novel, well atleast compared to the utter sub-human trash available so far.
MC is an expert who died from tribulation and reincarnated as a young man in a new world.
Due to the laws (not governmental laws, but spiritual/magical stuff) of the world he's in, he can't personally cultivate using the methods from his former world. Therefore, he must rely on his soul beast to cultivate, this is not an original idea, his soul beast is well known trash-tier, but with his OP past-life methods, it becomes stronger.
The way it's portrayed so far is what grabs my attention, there's young masters, but they don't act like arrogant d-bags. The author took the extra step to explain the feelings of side-characters to make them different then the "Oh so you're trash, hahaha". If you read it, you can see the difference compared to the mass produced garbage.
The world setting is pretty standard, yet the author takes the time to explain it, rather then giving us a cookie cutter template that we always see in other novels. He doesn't explain the world, but the differences in power systems between his former world and current.
The MC is an expert, so don't expect any character development. He's lived a full life already.
I haven't seen those cliché's where everyone mocks him on the daily, the attitudes and designs of other characters are different then regular novels.
In conclusion, there's not much difference so far (Chapter 20) with this novel and others, all though the genre of pets is cookie cutter, instead of taking it straight out of the package like other novels, the author has decided to explain things and increase the depths of other things.
Then again this is a C20 review, who knows if he goes full china #1 later.
Nice Novel, hope this gets picked....
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Interesting plot love the characters the the creation the story development, great work indeed, definitely saved in my library,
Interesting.
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The syntax and formatting are almost as bad as MTL. I can't read it. Takes me right out of the story. Another thing I noticed is that instead of role-playing each character the writer makes it incredibly cliche. Young master cliche. It's just not very good. Keep at it, man. Get a development editor and some proofreaders. Use Google Docs and Grammarly.
The characters are very one dimensional and the story overall reads like a grade school story. It would probably be suitable for young teens to read, but the story line moves so slowly that I’m not sure it could retain their attention. Most of the story reads like a summary of events: Character A did this, Character B did that. At best I can say this is a good framework for a story that needs more scene development and character depth
It caught my attention I hope they release this novel and put it to vote for it, I am already tired of novels about systems, it is about time that we have novels with Mc workers
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yow, the first chapter got me hooked, and wanting to read more, I really want to see him get stronger. I like this kind of Novel like the reborn and reincarnation thing. keep it up author, your novel has potential, you deserve this 5/5 rating. I'll support you.