Orange_Coffee
i read two ch. this novel remind me of the witcher: i can extract everything
I don't have any other way of saying, but to call it poorly planned. At the beginning the story promises an interaction and a plot with the lead villainess of the story (which is also the main selling point of the novel, and the title).then it gets detailed into some nonsense side quest of him acquiring some sort of powerup (which stretches upto 21 chapters for no reason)it makes it boring and i almost lost my interest in reading it.cuz like... who wants to know about all the fillers and side plots even before the story began?initially you'd atleast want to hook your audience by showing a glimpse/teasing them what you promised.anyway, i skipped/glazed past those initial filler chapters and went straight to vol 2 by sheer will. Will see how story progresses from here on out
Just about to shamelessly vote for myself, but saw the cover, liked the synopsis, read some of the chapters and poof! My stones are gone!Damn it. I need to sleep.
Writing Quality - Top notch.Update - So far, so good. Although it relatively new.Story Development - Excellent so far.Character - Well written and designed.World Background - The layout is great so far.Keep up the good work.
Hola, I know you are wondering about the updates of this book. I didn't abandon this book and privilege updates would commence next week. Thank you for always supporting this book. means a lot to me. can't wait to show you the closet of Marcellus and Claudia.
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"Embark on an epic journey where gods walk among mortals, ancient powers awaken, and the very fabric of reality trembles. In this tale of betrayal, redemption, and the rise of unlikely heroes, every chapter unveils new mysteries and breathtaking battles. If you're ready to dive into a world where the line between good and evil blurs, and destiny is shaped by those bold enough to seize it—then this story is for you. Don’t miss out on the adventure of a lifetime!"
A great story . really didn't think it would mention indian culture .
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I love the enthusiasm. I love the main character the plot the theme as well as the dynamic perfect setting the stage, especially in the world the MC find himself and great job. Can’t wait to read more.
Revenge and romance is so my jam. The drama and chemistry is exciting.
The world building is looking really good and the characters also seem really interesting,but honestly chapter 1 was really good it was pretty humourous too i didn't expect that right off the bat looking forward to what happens next!!
