I am reviewing a few chapters in but .... well not but... its just awesome. It was funny, unique, brilliant... I don't know, you just name it. Just give the book a chance and you will continue right from the first chapter. It's great work you have here author!
I like reading novels with a system involved that’s why I started reading this one. First of the characters. The MC is bland and we know next to nothing about him apart from his illness. There are also no side characters, more like extras in a movie that are rarely mentioned then easily forgotten.
The speed in which his skills improve is way too fast. Maxing our his skills in a matter of days is just too much. There’s barely any effort involved except spending some time grinding his skills. I can understand the first few levels being leveled fast but mastering a skill should take along time. I don’t understand how cooking a few types of dishes will somehow max out his cooking skill since there are thousands of different recipes out there-the same goes for his other skills.
Also the rewards for maxing our a skill is ridiculously high. It seems like everything is being handed to him on a silver platter and basically spoon feeding him with a spoon made of platinum.
If the author slows down abit and start fleshing out his characters out and do some worldbuiling then this could turn out to be pretty decent. At the moment there’s a lack of a goal except for getting stronger.
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This story is one of the best I have seen it is great with characters and tell the real sorry for me is one of the best
This is a good read especially if you came for a laugh when cultivation and op mc is what you are looking for.
I want to thank the author for sharing this good read with us readers and I hope he just continues making new chapters cause the story's concept is great.
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Great story by great Author.
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ఈ రచయిత చెడ్డ వార్తలను బాగా తీసుకోడు, అతను జాత్యహంకారుడు మరియు ఇక్కడ కూడా మనకు అలాంటి జాత్యహంకారం లేదు, ఇంగ్లీష్ ఏమి చెబుతుందో నాకు తెలియదు కాని ఈ నవల బాగా నిర్మించబడలేదు, ఇది ప్లాట్లోని రంధ్రాలతో పేలవంగా రూపొందించబడింది, ఇది సిగ్గుచేటు పాత్ర బాగాలేదు
Oh am really enjoying this book of yours the characters are great,t the plot and the writing style is good keep it up author,I have add to my library for update
Well I'm bad at reviewing novels so I'm gonna keep this short. The idea is good and interesting, the grammar is readable aside from small mistakes and the difficulty of knowing which one is talking. But yeah recommended for other to read
it a really nice novel tbh, just need a little bit of editing.
The story has a nice pacing to it. It starts with different povs and somewhat confuses the reader, but its a mystery so it's all good. It has a lot of potential and can be still improved. Hope the author continues updating more chapters.