Whenever i read i nee book/webnovel, i always need a start that captivates me, this has done just that and i plan to keep reading. The world building has made things both indepth and understandable at the same time.
First 70 chapters are great. Story is about the MC farming, getting system rewards, and all around becoming OP. Then, it seems like the author dropped the novel, and got replaced by another.
He joins a Supreme chat group, his junior sister finds out about him because he just randomly gives her some Phoenix blood essence but her reaction was simply ‘okay, cool! senior brother got some immortal encounters as a butterfly effect!’.
The fights make no sense, the MC has every dao mastered but somehow finds a way to struggle to kill someone with only one Dao partially mastered. Enemies have more plot armor than any MC has ever had, with just about the entire Elderly population popping up out of nowhere screaming ‘junior you dare?!?’
If the novel didn’t drastically change after chapter 70ish, it would of been one of the greats.
so, we got a very detailed five star review here, but unfortunately, it seems that webnovel deleted it...
i dont know why tho...
anyway, very fine details...
except for the part where he mentions spirit stones scattered everywhere.
cough cough
(spoiler: mc needs an actual map to download, and unless the location/info is written, he will not know anything. the map feature of the system is only a digital print of a map)
Wonderful, great, perfect, incredible?
To continue like this, without a doubt, one of my favorite novels.
I like Reylin's personality.
How he has transmitted his emotions to the game, bringing out another facet of him; although I wish that, in real life, he would also do more than just depend on his parents. I suppose he is still young and maturing or will he live like this forever?
Harem: Aria as the leader of the harem, please.
Layla, Maya, Steel Melody, Yuki and Emilia and more? Titiana, for example.
I like them all.
I guess this story is now officially dead. Since it's not translated but self written and it stopped in middle of what seemed to be a storyline (not paying premium for a dead book after all). Right now it's 3 months and counting since the last update.
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25 chapter review.
Honestly, much better than I expected. The mc transmigrated or reincarnated as a summoned beast and a random little girl named Vivian is his summoner.
I like to say that he transmigrated in a virtual game similar to The Legendary Mechanic. The mc himself is a BOSS-rated monster so he is quite strong with high potential.
The mc doesn't have a status panel but his summoner aka random NPC villager girl, Vivian does. As a NPC she can't see her status panel but MC can and he also can operate it. So, basically he can control the development of his summoner and himself through Vivian's panel.
Translation Quality: 5* (It isn't MTL but you might see some weird words that looks like mistranslation but probably isn't. The translator didn't give context so it's lost translation instead. Meaning lost in translation)
SoU: 5* (It's trial read)
Story Development: 5* (Honestly, read it yourself, it has 25 chapters as I am writing this review)
Character Design: 4* (Only Vivian has some unique personality, the rest of the characters are quite basic designs)
World Background: 5* (Basically The Legendary Mechanic. But for those who don't know. It's basically a 100% realistic virtual world where the mc is transmigrated as a summoned beast of a NPC, due that he is a NPC he doesn't have a level limit and can become very strong. Because it's a game there will be major events leading to many changes in the world where the mc will take advantage of due his future knowledge of the game)
Overall score: 4.8
Personal score: 4.5
trash no intro. no build up just random situation. also the mc (I guess idk) cringe/creepy. stopped at chapter 1 don't even try it it's a waste of time.
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Dude who puts deicide in the summary. I legit thought the people who wrote the summary misspelled ‘decide’ and wondered why people would use this word instead of ‘God killing’ blade....
I'm certain most of us had high expectations on this. But this has killed my brain cells a lot and I can't heads or tails of it. The Main Character is most displeasing and the world-building is horrible. I'm beyond speechless here. It is difficult to describe my disappointment atm to be honest.