Well.. I think you should change / edit the use of capital letters in the system conversation because it's not good if we use google translate.. that's all...
Hello. I'm only here to give 5 stars to my work. Don't mind me.
gawd this bad the plot is bad, the translation is bad, using the word cooldown instead of channelling, (xia xi is channelling his ice nova magic) the author also like to forget what he type or is it the translators fault e.g every rank has 10 levels in the early chapter then a few chapter later the rank disappear and only level is used,( even xia he got to level 15 when he should have been upgraded in rank and start agaim at level 1)
I’ve spent years wandering aimlessly through the darkness, you see for most of my life I’ve been blind. At least that was the case until I began reading Fallen Stars. Page after page, reveal after reveal the light I once thought was lost returned as a roaring cascade of emotions. For the 1st time I could see what I’d long to see for so long, GREATNESS.
Story is boring and there is nearly no development, MC is stupid and boring and the plot is bland...
would not recommend it and I'm droppig it!!
I hope his mom wont die if that happen it will be a path vengeance i dont like that......... And this 140 word thingy i hope they change this as well....
weak to strong I like this story quite entertaining also has that kind of system like the Commanding Wind and Cloud and lacks a bit of development in the real world but in general this is very derarrolla to the character as the sister and the characters of the real life.
this of my personal taste but please that it is not a dense protagonist that if a girl likes of the same one if it does not like that it rejects it and if it likes that it accepts that it is all
thanks for an entertaining novel
You definitely feel as if you are the mc. It has a good foundation from the start. Needs a few minor tweaks, but this does not take away from the story or flow at all. Has a really good start and for me a unique outlook. Keep up the good work author!
this story is good, i like the flow of the story and also the character's behavior..but the update takes so long..
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Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try!https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing