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author I love how u started to set up the characters and world and your take on this genre but you update this book way too little,
and I realy think if u put the time into this book it could be a banger.
so while u do have your first readers interested why dont u try(and i know writing is hard af) to update the book a little more pls
I can’t just give a 5 star review, but from what I’ve read this novel is very promising. I would like to ask for at least an update a month though since people might just stop reading if there’s nothing new for too long
Is this gonna be 'True Martial World' and 'I Want To Be A Superstar'. combined? If so then I'm forward to reading this , but I think the synopsis could be done better
The narration style gives me vibes of an African woman narrating a legend to her kids or grandkids and I love it. it feels rushed but if this is maintained throughout the novel it can be a good and innovative as well as bold narration style. Great book.
Only issue would be punctuation.
the commas are excessive. maybe watch a YouTube video on how to use commas and full stop. There. A 5 star book will be born.
Come on start this already I’am reall hooked by the synopsis and the tile so pretty pls start translating this already. Can’t wait anymore to see this in the next novels to be translated.
This is an interesting story becuase it breaks the mold of the typical cultivatation novels.
This is pure comedy so far, so your milage may vary depending on what sort of humour you are into.
The first few chapters are a little rough but if you hold out through them then the thrust of the story is revealed and if it's to your liking you will have a real gem to read.
The story wasn't for me but I know that it deserves a chance because I can see plenty of other people would like it if they get through the first 2 chapters (which is better than some stories where you have to white-knuckle 20-50 chapters just to determine if it's sh*t or not).
this is the good Novel for the new author,keep it up
I Like this
i am at chapter 250 right now and this is one of my favorite novels on here it can be confusing at times to understand stuff or
who is talking but that might just be me (also is there a discord if there is one can anyone throw a link my way many thanks in advance)
I haven't gone far with the book... but it's awesome
This my first time writing a review and my English is pretty bad so sorry if I made any mistakes.
This is one of my favorite novels I discovered it by chance but it turn out that I found gold.
Writing Quality- there are almost no grammatical errors English isn't my first language so even if there's some grammatical errors they are negligible since everything is understandable.
the writing style is so good that you feel like you're inside the story especially the different POVs of the same moment, that's what truly suck you inside the story. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Stability of Updates - there's no need to talk about this, the update is daily without any delays⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Story Development - steady development of the story with a lot of unexpected but enjoyable twists that make you eager to know what happens next and make you think of a lot of possibilities it can even make you join the {F5 SECT}.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Character Design - maybe you won't like the mc at first but as you see him changes (becoming smarter,stronger, more confident and more aware about what's around him) you'll love him.
as for other characters they are so real that you can feel their emotions and understand their thinking⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
World Background - it reminds me of the novel
-WARNING- THIS NOVEL IS ADDICTIVE, PROCEED WITH CAUTION.
Wow it's my first time writing something this long.