I appreciate the author in putting efforts in improving his writing.
Recommend this book to those that enjoy semi kingdom building and OP main character.
Great story author keep it up!!Keep updating.
the writing style is detailed and logical. the world background is interesting and hooks the reader's attention.just the paragraphs are a bit lengthy and could be simplified to refine an even more immersive version of the content.overall the story development is good and has a high potential to create a masterpiece.just give it a try, who might know you would be hooked in the first chapter.
The world and storybuilding are unique and intriguing. Occasional lapses in spelling/grammar don’t distract from the plot or characters; overall the writing quality is better than most of Webnovel. I find Soda to be a compelling and interesting foil to Lilo, and the concepts here are not just your typical copy and paste reincarnation story. I think if the publishing stability holds, this book will do well. Keep up the good work, Author!!
You should work hard yeah I mean very hard on this to make it a master piece
nice....................................
Not going to lie I was caught from the start. The way the main character developed from a boy confused from awaking in the middle of nowhere, to a badass soldier all because of the time he spent with the ones he cares about and that a tragedy that fell upon His last loved one may curse his life again is what drives him in this new world.
Yes! I gave it five stars! If you have read what I read, you would too. The name got me first, then the synopsis then the chapter. Gosh, I was hooked despite it being my first time reading this genre. Warning beforehand, the Santa we see at first is really annoying(I nearly strangled him several times) but it gets better if you just wait for it! I am definitely going to read more of this! Mage, you have impressed me!
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This story is a gem! The characters and plot line are well rounded. I love the fl, she's so over the top in everything without batting an eyelash.
Great writing, funny characters, intresting and unique plotpoint. What more could someone want. A great read by far, and easily one of my new favorites.