Spoiler Review after reading 400 Chapters of this novel. So let's get this out of the way, I like this novel. When I first read this novel I wasn't exactly sure how I felt about it. Usually novels with the title "System" are a hit or miss for me but I liked the concept of what the synopsis gave me so I ended up giving it a try and I'm happy to admit that this novel is kind of a gem on here. Be honest here. The novels on Webnovel are usually from people who are first time readers, somewhat experienced writers and the rare good veterans who know what their doing now. This novel is in the middle. The Writing Quality is a 4/5, the only reason I didn't max it is because the author keeps getting his He/She mixed up. Honestly with how well the author writes it wouldn't surprise me if I'm getting trolled or not. Story Development is Great. I'll be honest here and say I don't like the Female lead Anna. From her standpoint she reminds me of those insufferable cocky overpowered Korean protagonists. I mentioned Korean Protagonists because the 75% of the time they have a reincarnated person they usually have those traits. Noel on the other hand is the real jewel. I'll just leave it at that. I give Character Design a 3 because honestly there's nothing that stands out to me to remember these characters besides one has a System and the other is a Regressor. All in all I'd recommend this book. Yes the novel is kind of a bumpy ride at the beginning but I'm happy that it smoothens out and keeps going upward. I don't regret trying this novel and if it ever got published to a real book I'd definitely buy it. (Of course I hope they'd fix the he/she problem though.)
Good story lines …keep it up auther.want to read more
Brother, no words., but awesome. you write so good, and still make us feel and expect something. suspense is grippy and thrilling. It might be stressful, but keep on doing it brother. Thank you for this book
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reading this novel has become my daily routine. really interesting and fast update . plots are also really unique. please don't drop it
"The Desolate Age" is a breathtakingly original and enthralling post-apocalyptic novel that takes readers on a gripping journey of survival, hope, and resilience. The vividly described world is rich with detail and complexity, drawing readers in and immersing them in a world that is both terrifying and awe-inspiring.The characters are expertly crafted, with each one bringing a unique perspective and voice to the story. Jack, the main protagonist, is a powerful symbol of hope and resilience, and his unwavering determination to create a better world is truly inspiring. The other characters in the novel are equally compelling, with complex motivations and backstories that make them feel like real people.The plot is expertly paced, with tension and action building steadily throughout the novel. The narrative takes readers on a journey of unexpected twists and turns, constantly keeping them on the edge of their seat and engaged in the story.Overall, "The Desolate Age" is a powerful and thought-provoking novel that is sure to leave readers breathless. It is a must-read for anyone who loves post-apocalyptic fiction or stories about the resilience of the human spirit. Highly recommended!
The thing which I liked the most about this novel is it's dialogues. There are lots of hilarious jokes and sarcasm inside plus even the neutral conversation seemed real, like one would actually talk like that in real life. The flow is smooth to read. Some editing definitely needs to be done, but for a new author this is a job well done. My favourite character as of now have been Stephan since he's so jolly and friendly.
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Only 12 chapters and gotta say enjoying what this author is doing. At first l thought the family the MC was living were too kind and a bit weird how they just let him be part of the family willing to pay for all of his expenses but later it was explained they were orphans which gave the reason to their kindness but also later soo wan if l recall how to spell that name correctly was actually not ignorant but observing the MC. I thought that was a great play done by the author. Anyways good job author cause you did GOOD!!
As an author I will shamelessly give myself a 5 star as i found my story a little unique, i hope the readers would appreciate my work and give me power stones and reviews, its a huge motivation. I also have other books please check it out.Thanks for the hard work myself
great story one of the top 10 in my book. keep going with this story! i will keep reading it!...................................................
This is an interesting novel! Thank God I found it. Phew! Thank you for this wonderful novel and I'll continue reading it just like "wish of the dragon" it's an interesting novel so as this one. So I'm glad to find it. ? keep up the great work!??