A cunning military man with many lovers creates a compelling and intriguing narrative filled with drama and complexity.
Not a bad book. If I was into this genre I would very much like it
the only complaint i have is translation quality sometimes but otherwise its pretty good
This story has great potential, looking forward to the next chapter
This novel and the character is feels like I know them ??... author where is your hand ....?♥️♥️? . please upload faster i cant wait more to read next chapter i love Indian story
Let me go over one by one.Writing Quality had become great. I read and reviewed one of the author's previous books and from there, his writing quality has jumped way higher. There are no Grammer mistakes, at least none I could catch. There is a bit too much exposition sometimes, like explaining the customs of the land and their significance along with describing the reactions of the supporting main leads a bit too extensively. The first is needed in all respects lest the readers feel alienated but the latter could have been toned down just a bit, but that's just my opinion.Story Development so far is great. The author really catches your attention and doesn't let go. me, personally, I didn't like the addition of the harem from Greek mythology but that's just my personal preference. I do feel that it was revealed too soon, but then again, revealing it too late might have led to the readers growing attached to Draupadi only.Characters are all dynamic and serve their own purpose. Especially the character of Krishna was so beautifully added. I do have some bias about the way the author underlines the Dynamic between the Kauravas and the Pandavas though. In a lot of literary and TV media, you always see the authors or the directors take a side and support a particular group and the author does the same and supports the Kauravas. But there stands to reason that no one in the Mahabharata is actually a good character. They're certainly not bad as they are followers of Dharma, but they are evil in a way that does not violate the Dharma of that age and that has been beautifully underlined in the original Epic. But then again, these are all creative choices and the author writes the characters beautifully.Update Stablility is great.World Background instantly gets a five star since the work it's trying to adapt is so expansive and complex by itself. it can make way for a lot of interesting philosophical and narrative moments. and the existence of other myths only aids to that.Wish you well author! keep writing!
Love the way you wrote. The beginning of the story wasn't rushed nor was it slow. This story is should become popular. Also, I would suggest you to add some more tags to your novel such as mystery.
I'm very excited for this book. This is so intriguing. The plot was unique to me. And what a very interesting thoughts of the character. It was relatable. Please finish this book in the future author. I would definitely look out for this.
Story is ? so far can’t wait to see where you go from here
I love this book already ?Few chapters in and I'm hooked !!!The scenes are so detailed I need More chapter!!!Keep updating I'm following
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