I really enjoyed the story and hope it update so
Still reading the beginning chapters, tragic is just a little word to express the story. Heartbreaking. Tried really hard to suppress my tears. So far it's more close to reality, a practical story, but I'm waiting for the twist in upcoming chapters. gonna add it to my library for later. keep up the good work.
AUTHOR PLEASE DONT LEAVE US ANYMORE!!!this is honestly one of the best cultivation storys in a loooooong time
Let’s just cut the balls off of cucks they don’t need them
I loved the how the author introduced the background of MC before the transmigration! I hate when authors start the novels with the MCs already in full swing and not even caring about their past lives. In this novel the MC morn for his past life but he also had a closure for his past life. I also loved the character descriptions.Specifically AURORA AND AYIA I LOVE YOU GIRLS.
I really like business management novels and this one combines business management with entertainment!!!I loved how the MC is building his empire. Specially after he received the Naruto manga!! I can’t wait for Theo to buy a Anime Studio to launch the Naruto anime!!!
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I wanna say that I really really like this story and I definitely want to keep up with reading it. There were points where you made my toes and fingers curl because I could just feel the pain. However, that pain that I felt didn't come from how you described it, it came from prior works that properly described the same things. Mentioning that it happened, I was able to recall on those past works that I had read. I don't feel that they are in pain and I don't feel that they're afraid other than you've said that they are. I think that for a series like this, emotions are very very important to portray correctly and I think that's definitely something you should work on. For example, you could have described her thumb being dislocated much better, and given a bit of detail to the beginning of one of their limbs being cut off without going into the whole thing. By the time you got to the part of how they were laying there with missing toes and fingers and they were bloodied and naked, I didn't really feel any of it and I should. I should be pitying them, and I should feel for them.Also, you wrote that the kidnappers wanted Zach to make out with Odette but he hesitates and this didn't really make sense to me. When he's so afraid like you said, and the two of them have been middle school sweethearts, they're already talking marriage - making out should be nothing at this stage in their relationship. When I was in middle school, we were all already making out with our boyfriends. Maybe it's a cultural thing, maybe they're more conservative, but if that's the case I think that you should make that clear. Otherwise it was really shocking that he didn't just do something that most couples do comfortably out in public. As for world background and character design, I feel like you didn't describe anything regarding these two things. I don't have much of an idea of what Zach and Odette look like other than their clothes during the 3rd regression. I'd like to see you expand on these things in the future.I'm going to keep reading because I still really like the plot and I want to know where it goes, but I would love to see you improve on these things. If you did that this book would be close to perfect.
I apologize for not being a fan of the “SYSTEM” crutch. My Werewolf System doesn’t copy and paste pages of “system” data, instead it is woven seamlessly into a few paragraphs with amazing skill and forethought. The story is unsurprising about a werewolf protagonist from a poor background. Like many werewolf teen stories, it centres around Gary, his social problems and his friends.What keeps this novel from leaving my grip is the world of gangs and gang violence that the author draws us into. Organized crime that has insinuated itself into every corner of alternate earth society, from the upper echelon‘s of government to school yards. If this doesn’t get your attention, did I mention the Marvel Universe Mutations, humans altered with Animalism DNA modifications? I guess I should have lead with that and not wasted your time better spent reading this thrilling story.
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Very interesting galactic novel. Good beginning story and solid character building. I also like how the story develops and was intrigued by the novel's plot while I was reading it. Definitely, adding it to my collection!
Everything is nice but it is very hard to keep up with things. Like one moment she's doing something but in the next, she's doing something else. The arc with him being Cyra is suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper boring in my opinion. I read this because of the non-human stuff but then it makes the mc into a human and barely goes back to his original body.