love the but the is a bit misleading, he has not adapted to one thing yet so it is kind of a bumer
my old review was deleted (I think I gave like 2.7 stars) this time I will not take an hour of my time to write an in-depth review. Why should I? This story is bad and it is getting worse over time, earlier chapters (until 100) are pretty good and promising. But at some point the author has stopped trying to write a good story and focused on writing as much as possible. The focus shifted to earning money which is TOTALLY FINE. But he sadly disregarded proofreading and story telling which is NOT FINE.
Great novel in both story and writing quality. It has received a perfect rating which is well deserved and the novel has alot of potential. Hopefully the author keeps up the good work and updates regularly, looking forward for new chapters.
Does the writing quality get any better? I'm currently on chapter 18, and at the beginning there were alot of mistakes. Now I still see the same mistakes being repeated.Don't get me wrong the story is very intriguing! It keeps me at the edge of my seat wanting more!!It's just the spelling, and punctuation that make me a bit confused at times. For example the Author uses her instead of him at times, and it makes it very hard to tell the persons gender especially when you first introduce them.
the start is not that good and the way that knowledge is so hard to get gives supreme magus vibes. The concept of magic in this world is weird in the sense that authorities are governing certain aspects of reality and the magus is only offering raw magic. Nevertheless the infusion of true meaning in specialities makes the novel system that much intriguing. Its fair to say this novel is snowballing in a sense that it only gets better and the writing quality in it self is top notch. I super recomend this and my only time being truly bored was the flashback monotous and extended experience that Evin had while sorting out his memories to the former authority
Novel idea is rather good, an enjoyable read. I'm pretty much a fan and I hope you're able to update more each day. Like the others, some grammatical here and there but it seems like your first work. Good job! I hope your writing skills improve throughout the story!
The book is written so beautifully with strong vocabulary. It keeps you on edge. Author is very talented to write such an exceptionally good book.
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Wow! This books is giving me that thrilling and suspense vibe. It will intrigue you and that will push you to read more. I'm looking forward to read more chapters.
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The book is a nice slow read. I would recommend it if you have some free time and nothing else to do or you're interested in seeing things from the perspective of the infinitely powerful.